Don’t Touch My Brother, or You’ll Pay a Price You Can’t Afford!

No one has good works It is recommended that those who are watching directly go in and watch. I have read many books, and this is one of the few that I can fully immerse myself in. It is also a great product. It's the kind of story that's long and doesn't feel like it's dragging out at all. The interaction between the two brothers is also very real and heart-warming Although I was deceived by the "warm-hearted" label at the time, there are also a lot of plots in it. The author's writing style is very good, and it can be seen that the author has polished the book. You can see the author's good intentions in every few words in the book. There are a lot of foreshadowings, which should be taken back later in the story. It feels like the total story is only 8% progressed (maybe not yet, as of Chapter 33) I hope the author can persist in completing this book and bring you more high-quality works in the future [Like] (ps: I was stunned when I saw Aunt Bai Zhi in the book)

First of all, I would like to give the book a five-star rating ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧. The plot is smooth and the emotions are not pretentious. Especially the shaping of the characters is particularly outstanding and the writing is profound. The part in the orphanage is true. . . It's particularly shocking. It doesn't feel like the text you can see on a novel platform like Tomato, which has an overall style that favors cool writing. . . But I still don't quite understand the early plot, that is, the part where Lin Zhuo trains Lin Po and Lin's father and Lin's mother have prophetic worries. Lin Zhuo himself was originally a naughty and cute child in school. How come he suddenly understands so many of the most barbaric principles of survival? And he teaches Lin Po? Is it possible that the author deliberately concealed it? Also What's going on with the sweetness in the introduction? I thought it was a sweet article, woo woo woo Now it seems that it is not an exaggeration to say that it is a piece of abuse (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻ Also, didn't the first paragraph of the article say that this was a peaceful era? The lives of those two little ones must have been too miserable. . And can the peaks of slave owners on plantations hundreds of years ago be seen in modern times? ? Putting aside the waste of human life, there seems to be no profit in doing this. . 8.20 The number of readers has also increased. I hope the author will write better and better [laughs] Also, why are Nuomi and Cang Hui offline? (The author secretly changed the introduction) 8.30 Hmm, I feel like at this stage it's better to focus on the protagonist and related main lines. The description of the general environment often refers to the political game at the highest level of a country, and sometimes it is written in an entire chapter, without even the names of the core characters appearing. The author may want to lay a relatively complete foundation for the protagonist's subsequent development? [Exploration] But the importance of plot advancement and character creation should be higher than the description of this general environment. This description should be interspersed with the development of the core character's plot, rather than being driven by it. @ 9.7 The author's description of political games is actually very good. The characters, motivations, positions, moral boundaries, explicit rules, hidden rules, chips and prices in the game, etc. Are all written down. The specific process is not childish, and the characters are not very stereotyped. It's just that I wrote too much [Petrochemical] The political game is essentially the big fish eating the small fish. If you write too much about this process, it will become boring. 9.13 Hmm... It seems that we have passed the early stage now, and the world view has almost been developed. The pace is indeed relatively slow. Looking at this posture, it is estimated that it will cost a million [exploration] 9.20 I've changed my profile again, it's obvious that I'm trying to attract people [face covering] 9.28 Dreams cannot match reality, we are destined to meet together

There is no one who can be called a good writer. The writing style of this book is similar to that of the evil dragon next door that the little hero Fury defeated. Both are very delicate, but I personally feel that this one is better. The plot at the beginning was very good, but the gap between the front and back and Qizhuo's mother's "You will never be alone again" at the end really shocked me. All in all, five stars (This article only publishes Chapter 6 of Volume 2 and its previous chapters, more comments have been reviewed for accuracy)

It's really good-looking, Qizhuo is super handsome, and Qipo is really cute. The setting still echoes in my mind for a long time after reading it. The interaction between Qipo and Qizhuo is really delicate. The whole story really touched me. I even think about this scene in my dreams. No matter how hard and tired I am during the day, there is still a little beast to soothe my pain at night. I still yearn for it in my heart. It's a pity that the author just stopped updating, and didn't even give an ending. It just ended like this. I really dream about the two brothers Qizhuo and Qipo at night [crying]

The author writes that the knife has two brushes, and the writing style is really good Go directly into the pit vertically, and you will be lucky if you are a group of brothers. Good book. To be honest, the writing style is really good. The last book I read with writing style was "The Holy Sword Reborn", but this book obviously has a better sense of immersion. A book that needs to be carefully read. The book with mediocre writing but good plot is "Across the World: Keeping Peace Here" next door. I really like watching the protagonist's game. Holy shit, I had an intracranial orgasm and the knives were so fierce. It's such a good book.

The writing is pretty good, but some of the characters' behaviors are too circuitous and hard to watch. After flipping through it, I found that the author stopped updating, so let's leave it like this [face covering] Writing is not easy, so I'll give it four points to express my support. I don't recommend it very much.

It turned out to be the nanny Xiaolang and his nanny, the violent brother. The front is warm and beautiful, but the back is "warm and not good". A small amount of leftover candy by the author was found among a large number of knives.

The author must not abandon the trap [blowing kiss]

There is no one who can do good work, and in the end, I have no interest in knives anymore [laughs] The plot has a strong sense of immersion, and the game between various forces is very exciting to watch.

The writing is great! The plot and writing are very good, and the emotional description is also very delicate. It can be seen that the author writes with great care. [Like][Like][Like]