A Few Troubles for a Straight Guy in the Beast World

It's quite good, but there are a few minor issues. The transitions and some small details aren't handled very well, and some sentences are repeated a bit too often. Overall, it's still a good medium-length novel. 😘😘😘

I think it looks pretty good so far.

It's quite good, but it's a pity the story is so short. I'm looking forward to the author writing a long fantasy novel about the beast world! 😄😄😄

It's great! Keep up the good work, author!

It's alright, you can treat it as a sweet treat. It's sweet, but there are very few side stories; I'd like to see some.

A sweet romance novel set in a beast world; it's quite good.