Can Dawn in the Mourning Veil Dream of Amphoreus?
哀丽秘榭的黎明能否梦见翁法罗斯
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- Completed
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- 202k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
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- 1y ago
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I’ve Recently Become Obsessed with Honkai: Star Rail. Do You Fine Folks Have Any Recommendations?
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Any Good Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction? I'm Out of Books to Read. Please Recommend Some.
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Honkai: Star Rail!!!!!!
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Hand Over... the Bai E Books...
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I want to read books similar to "Honkai: Star Rail: A Honkai Impact 3rd Simulation Starting in Amphoreus".
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I want books like [Honkai: Star Rail] What a Coincidence, I Know the World of National Destiny Inside Out.
Gender-Bender, Male-Targeted Tragedies That Will Wreck Me (Hehe, I'm Not Afraid of Angst!)
Looking for a National-Fate Story About Bai E, With No Romance
Looking for a Bai E-centered national-fortune story, though other genres are fine as long as Bai E is the focus. For national-fortune stories, I'd prefer the real Bai E!!! (No CP! No CP, no CP, no CP.) I'll curse out anyone who posts a romance!
Novels That Deserved Better Scores
I'd like something like After Losing My Job and Getting Dumped, I Lay Back and Earned a Fortune. It's the first novel I've read that seamlessly shifts from urban fantasy to the apocalypse, and its setup makes sense.
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Looking for Amphoreus Stories, Ideally About Bai E
I want to read something similar to Honkai: Star Rail: National Fortune, Playing Phainon and Summoning Saber.
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Are There Any Stories Where Bai E Is the Love Interest?
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Looking for Honkai: Star Rail and National Destiny Stories, No Roleplay!! Recommend Roleplay Stories and Don't Blame Me for Getting Mad
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Any Honkai: Star Rail Stories as Good as This One?
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Reincarnation, ancient times, interstellar, or futuristic settings.
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Beautiful! Beautiful! Personally speaking, I don't think Xiaobai is out of character at all. I feel the author wrote it very well, and the interactions between Xiaobai and the train crew are very cute. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. The author's portrayal of Iron Tomb is, in my opinion, rather endearing (?).
This is just my personal opinion and may not be objective. (I haven't played the game "Armor Stacking," so if you disagree with what I'm saying, just ignore it. The following is based on my own comparison of this game and my own views.) First, the quality: it stands out among fanfiction.
I think the author writes really well, especially the four chapters titled "If Kephale Never Forgets." After reading it once, I reread it almost every day. The meeting of the Golden Blood is really good (although it's only temporary), and the author's portrayal of Bai'er is also excellent (at least better than miHy). The Iron Curtain that appears in the story also adds to the enjoyment.
Samoyed Xiaobai and Raccoon Qiongbao will be lifelong anonymous guests 🥺 I can do anything
After some thought, I decided to share my impressions based on what I've seen so far. Iron Tomb's presence is too overwhelming; he clearly has memories, while Bai E is in a state of amnesia. This means that problems Bai E could normally handle now require Iron Tomb to solve, and Bai E's own abilities need to be unleashed by Iron Tomb. I personally can't accept this 🤦
This is the most satisfying fanfiction I've ever read. Aside from the slightly infrequent updates, I'm very happy with the fast-paced plot and well-developed characters. It's a great fanfiction, and I encourage the author to keep up the good work!
It's great! It's one of only four books by Tomato that I'm currently following that feature novice writers (I've basically read all the books Tomato mentions featuring novice writers). But it has similar issues to the long review, and also, the climax of the novice's highlight/the emotional connection of the story doesn't quite connect, which feels a bit of a waste. >_
The pace is quite fast, but so far it seems to be just a White Calamity who can transform into a god and defeated the Iron Tomb, but doesn't have the memories of reincarnation.
It feels like Iron Tomb is going to resemble Xiao Shi (?), Author, keep it up! The scores are out! Let's get more people to help raise the scores!
This is a fantastic book, incredibly enjoyable, with a smooth and engaging plot. The only downside is—could the author please update more often? I really love it! (//∇//)