Defective? The Goddesses I Raise Are All Top-Tier!

So far, it's pretty good and comfortable to watch. It's not like a traditional novel that suddenly creates a powerful enemy. But the second goddess is a bit wrong. First of all, my understanding of the protagonist is that of a savior, which is dominant. However, the protagonist is trying his best to capture Ye Tanhua, which feels like a dog licking. Secondly, Ye Tanhua's spiritual support is not the protagonist but her first coach, Uncle Li. Although Although they are similar to the image of a father-daughter relationship, I always feel something is not right. It is like the protagonist in a beast-control novel contracts a very powerful pet, but the best relationship with this pet is not the protagonist but its breeder since childhood. There is a very uneasy feeling. If the protagonist's opponent cheats and catches Uncle Li and makes Ye betray the protagonist, I feel that Ye will probably choose Uncle Li [laughs awkwardly].

It's very interesting to watch, it pursues dreams passionately and breaks prejudices. Although I haven't watched Jockey Girl, some people have commented that it is similar. Do you think the description is accurate? This book is different from the machine girls in that there is no driver and all they need is their own efforts. I still hope to optimize the chapters about Ye Tanhua's mental shackles. It's not that I find it baffling, but I still feel a little worried about the character. Although I can guess that the protagonist will buy it together with the coach, I still hope to write some signs or hints in advance.

This can be ranked first among the similar ones I have seen. It really feels like a traditional competitive game, and everyone will love the story of an inferior horse's counterattack. I still want to digress. I haven't watched many sports games. In the past few years, the only one I've been paying attention to is KPL. My favorite team is E Star, and I have watched them decline from a giant to the present. While reading, I really kept comparing and hoping that they would rise again. (This seems to be seriously off topic [thinking]) A quick update from the author, this book is really interesting. It is much better than those jiniangwen that puts old wine in new bottles.

The early stage is too depressing, and the male protagonist's methods may be bizarre, which may cause dissatisfaction among some readers in the middle and later stages. However, the male protagonist's ability is unparalleled and he has indeed supported a family. He is the fulcrum of this book's group portrait. He is not a useless character like "Yu Xiaogang". Moreover, the characters are all very good, and the plot is handled smoothly, but it is not recommended to watch it with a blind eye towards the characters. There are many foreshadowings and a strong sense of atmosphere, but the summary of the previous seasons was relatively long, and the number of words gradually decreased in the later seasons. All in all, the flaws do not affect the overall story, but there are patches at the end. It is suitable for readers who like counterattacks, inspirational and long-form novel works.

This is a mecha competition novel written based on the setting of Jockey Girl. The second gray-haired monster is obviously based on the setting of Oguri Hat. But the male protagonist in the article is not so much the protagonist as he is just a tool to keep the club running. As the owner of the club, the protagonist is only responsible for discovering talents and harvesting rice, and training is also done by the trainers in the club. In terms of setting, it is basically impossible to have some kind of emotional development with the Valkyrie. Ps: If you like reading about passionate sports, you can read it. If you were tricked by the title into thinking you have a harem, you can leave.

It's past 6 o'clock. I think it's still too low. This novel should be telling a story, a story about a "miracle". Whether it's the protagonist or the supporting character, they all have their own ideological core, rather than being pure tools. He can show the characters' emotions very well, which is what many novels don't have. Although the plot is relatively classical and old-fashioned, the writing is still online. After all, emotions have been a difficult thing to describe since ancient times. It's not about words or rhythm, but about the heart. It's strange. I read more than 70 reviews and none of them are lower than three stars, but the rating is only over 6 points. I don't understand what Tomato's rating system is? Anyway, I've read many novels with this phenomenon

It is one of the most inspirational novels I have ever read, and it is also the best group drama in my opinion. I think it can be adapted into an anime. When reading each chapter, a fragment will be played in my mind. If this book is finished, I really hope that there will be an anime. The descriptions of many characters are great. Each character has his own story, his own experience and personality, as well as his own will and transformation. I hope the author writes better and better, and the most important thing is to write more!

It originates from "My Machine Girl is World Class", but goes beyond "My Machine Girl is World Class". As we all know, "My Machine Girl is World Class" can be regarded as the originator of this genre. This book inherits most of the advantages of the former. At the same time, the in-depth creation of supporting characters is eye-catching. The theme exploration and character creation surpass "My Robot Girl is World Class". If I have to be picky, it's probably because the plot is a bit more classic, because after "My Machine Girl Is World Class" was banned, many imitative themes appeared. Readers' threshold for similar plots has increased, and it is easy to guess the general plot direction later, and their interest may decrease relatively. But overall, this is still an excellent web article. Four-star level, five-star encouragement.

The writing style in the front is a bit green, and there are even some direct references, but the writing style in the back is much better. Then, the front can be said to be idealistic, and the back feels realist. The front is ideal and beautiful, everyone is working hard, and everything is getting better. Personally, the retirement plot of more than 600 chapters is too realistic, and the retirement of the two goddesses is uncomfortable to watch. Generally speaking, it requires patience to read the book from the front, and the reader needs to be God's perspective at the back (with a rationality that is unemotional and overrides emotion). Otherwise, if you read it with emotion, the imperfection will contrast with reality and make the reader very uncomfortable. However, the author's writing style has been greatly improved in the later period, and the characters are well shaped. Although it is unrealistic, judging from the description, there is no possibility of the two goddesses coming back, but they still hope to come back later, which is quite consistent with the theme of the book.

Do you know that the character of the horse racing girl is so easy to use? [Eating Melon] It is rare for women's competitive writing to not have a female protagonist. The current main problem is that there are too few group portraits and opponents are portrayed. There are only two or three who can see the future. I don't understand why Lin Yuehua and Su Linxue have to use the same retirement method, just to highlight the pressure of injuries and pave the way for Jin Yu? The main character group is okay, and it seems that I can still write it for a long time. Once this group is finished, there will be a new generation to write about. It's a very interesting book. If you like watching women fight, you can read it [laughing evilly]