I Woke Up at Sea, and the Capitalist Heiress Became an Undocumented Immigrant

The outline of the article is quite good. Your work is a novel, not an essay. Shu Qing, there are too many revisions, the novel should focus on continuing the story Your article has the mood of a narrative prose

This article is novel, the story has ups and downs, and the map is updated quickly! A very special chronicle! The heroine is a very decisive person, patriotic and kind-hearted. She is ruthless when she should be ruthless. Not the Holy Mother!

At the beginning, it looked like she was writing a narrative. The heroine would always forget how to use space, and suffered a lot of unnecessary hardships. The ups and downs of her life slowly attracted people to continue reading. The plot was novel, the suffering in a foreign country, the waste of human life, the dormancy in the small and insignificant moments. She returned to the motherland after many difficulties and provided food for the border. In fact, the food provided for the border was not cautious at all. That is to say, the author did not pursue it because she was her own mother. She was lucky during the time when she went to Kyoto to find her aunt on the border! After arriving at Big Banyan Tree, I integrated into life, and all kinds of little experts, the backbone of the village, led everyone to survive. Things like fighting for rice and enmity would not happen. It was really good, a very harmonious life. There was no such kind of super in the village, which was very good. Later, when the educated youth went to the countryside, it was a relatively ordinary story, so I won't comment too much! Overall it looks good

The writing is very good, and it made me feel the heroine's strength from the end of the world. The details are a little problematic, but it is innocuous. After finding her aunt, she and the villagers live together. There is no best, and everyone develops towards a better future together. The heroine does not say that she provides free materials to the villagers. Many of them are obtained through everyone's hard work.

The perspective of the character, the environment, time and place, the background culture of the time, etc., And the way of logical thinking. Divergence, special relativity in wide areas. People, general characteristics of the development of things, regular causal relationships. The world view and storyline that structure the characters' lives.

This is one of my favorite novels. It is tense, exciting, and the spirit of bravely facing the enemy without fear and difficulty is the pride of every Chinese. Thank you to the author! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Others are desperately trying to escape home, but the heroine is desperately trying to get home. It's good to go back to the old ways.

I really like the detailed descriptions in this book. When we met the bandits at sea, the whole family suffered a shocking disaster, and when they were struggling to survive, the psychological description of the heroine was really detailed. Later, it was also because the aunt, the only surviving member of the family, took root in the small mountain village and devoted herself to leading them out of the three years of disaster. The heroine's desert-like heart gradually becomes fuller. It's a very good period story, with a period atmosphere and good details.

The twists and turns of the story reveal the extraordinary life of the heroine, which is as ordinary as water. It is like a long scroll slowly unfolding, and when the panoramic view is revealed, the years are silent, and it is peaceful and beautiful in the end. Just like in the end, it turns out that she is the eldest lady of the Song family. If she had known it, she would be full of regret, which is ridiculous and relieved! Some people live in their own world and are busy in vain, but the heroine and the hero become the protagonists of the story.

It's not bad, but the writing about going to the countryside later doesn't sound like it's from the south, it's more like it's from the north.