One Piece: Only the Victorious Are Just

The writing style is clean and neat, and it is an author who strives for the most perfect character. The plot is smooth, clear, concise and reasonable. I hope it is not a perfect psychological writing that is conceived in a moment of passion and delays reality. Advantages: Chapters 1-3 perfectly analyze the cruel survival of the world of pirates (winner is a king and loser is a bandit). Many fan authors do not even understand the most basic world and social situation: "I ask you authors who just talk about it, what is the theme of pirates?", "OK, you are a fool, you write to satisfy your own desires, there is no logic at all." Disadvantages: I only see "chapter" ships, which are also the basics of the pirate world and science (I don't like the author: the ship structure of 50 meters wide / 150 meters long, "and bow wings", a ship with no physical power science. The bow can be engraved what you like, or you can reflect your own symbolic inner thoughts on your own flag)

It deserves a five-star rating, because the protagonist created by the author has his own ideas. He does not blindly rely on the so-called prophet plot, nor does he lick the protagonist group or the navy. He forms a group to develop his power alone, has time to settle, and advances in a planned way, which is quite good.

All of them think that the protagonist's strength improvement in the pirate novel is the most reasonable. He grows up step by step, and finally uses the three colors of domineering to fuse and destroy Im! (Great idea) To travel through time, you must rely on your own force and resourcefulness to defeat the world government, rather than just flying around the road! Isn't it better to gather companions yourself and then train them than to just find the original protagonist group? The ending is also good, because the protagonist's strength has been raised to the limit, and he has united and resisted forces. Do we have to wait for Luffy to grow up for a few more years to come?

It's quite good-looking and has a moderate pace and a clear main line and goal. However, it's a little bit procrastinating and should be rated a nine, so I'll give it a five-star rating. But it's very well-written and should be a hit. If you're interested, you can come in and take a look.

Finally, I have a fanfic that is not a system, and the rhythm is not too bad and the rhythm is good. Finally realized the feeling of panning for gold in the shit heap mentioned on Douyin.

The writing is very good, the author keeps up the good work and urges updates online [smile][smile][smile]

This is my first time writing a book, everyone!

A pure story about a bull and horse traveling through the world of pirates. He has no system and no super talent. He finds the first thunder fruit and gives it to his subordinates.

It's usually a book, but if you're short of books, you can read it

Well enough. . . . Just the whole powerful fruit without hanging it