After Raising a Sickly, Unhinged Beauty, I Left

Overall, it's okay. The main character has a decent outlook on life. The male and female protagonists get along well with each other. There's no takeover plot. (Although the heroine's initially yandere partner was not the hero, she wasn't emotionally attracted to Xia Xing. Later, the description was more like the heroine was too withdrawn and needed a friend. This Xia Xing drove away everyone around her and then monopolized all the feelings. After becoming a "friend", the heroine didn't love him but needed someone to accompany him. Judging from this situation, the heroine is very pure.) The emotional line is also handled well, I can give it 4 stars. The heroine is so softly written. I really like this kind of writing. I would give it 5 stars for encouragement.

① This book is one of the few that depicts the male protagonist in depth. Many authors focus on portraying the female protagonist and ignore the character of the male protagonist, which sometimes makes the reading very bad. My book does not have a standardized Asashi, but Purposefully being gentle to others is reflected in the heroine in the first chapter, and sometimes the male protagonist is quite funny o(￣ヘ￣o#), and it can be seen that he has true feelings for the heroine o(￣ヘ￣o#) ②The portrayal of the heroine is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, and the transformation from before to after is also very natural and the contrast is cute. Especially the heroine in the first chapter left a deep impression on me. At first I wanted to poke the male protagonist, but later I wanted to poke the hero more o(￣ヘ￣o#)[][Laugh][Laughter][Laughter][Laughter][Laugh]. Similarly, the heroine in the second chapter is also very cute. ③The writing style is relaxed and a little sad, with comedy mixed with sadness (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑). What I particularly like is that the author did not use the system to improve the number of words (although it was a little watered down), and there are very few scenes, almost acting as a tool o(￣ヘ￣o#) To sum up, I hope the author will write more realistic things. After all, the chapters about these two women are too long. I think five heroines at your speed are enough. I hope to come to my favorite Shura field soon [sneaky laugh]o(￣ヘ￣o#)

The writing is really good, it's a bit touching and brings me to tears. Maybe it's because I feel the same way, but if a yandere has been around for such a long time, to be honest, it's not suitable for this title and introduction. Really, either the front line is too long, or it's uneven. I think this is quite suitable for singles. As for the female protagonist, I can't even imagine how painful it would be if every female protagonist was so touching and separated in the end. If there are multiple female protagonists, there must be more than one. If they come one by one at the end, the higher the number, the more uncomfortable it will be 🤦 I respect the author, but I really hope that the writing will not be unfinished.

The theme of Jin's prodigal son, but this book has a new flavor, not bad, I like Xiao Jiang, Xiao Jiang is so cute 🤭 Is the heroine single? If you really hope that there won't be too many female protagonists, because the book "The Prodigal Son" has a lot of nerves in the front and back in the book, and the tonic is following his old path!!!

Start recommending 😳 Pursuing data is very important, don't beg for help 😘

Good-looking girl, cool girl, white mobile phone, Weiwei, looking at the sky. I know the smell of the sea. The author probably wrote it while soaking in the water☝️🤓In addition, the author Kavin's kung fu is also top-notch😅

It's very interesting, the male protagonist's outlook on life is correct 🤔👍 Xia Xingzhen CS

It's very interesting. The author is really good at writing about the emotions between people. Little Jiang Yue is also very cute~ Definitely worth five stars, but the author is too short on the number of words~ Although he knows how to write emotions in this way, the author needs to update it fiercely 😢😢😢

The advantages are that the heroine is well described in the first part, and the second part is more toxic and can be read. The disadvantages are that the writing is quite serious starting from the second part. The specific manifestation is that many words will appear several times in a chapter, which affects the reading experience, such as the system opening prompt sound. There is really no need to make it appear seven or eight times in a chapter, and only half of it appears at one time! There are even places where the system's beeps are only two pages apart. You see the beeps on the first page, and they appear again after turning two or three pages. At the same time, some of the timing of these beeps lack a certain logic. What impressed me the most was that in the second chapter, the male protagonist had clearly seen the system before, but then he saw the system again when he was having an emotional scene with the female protagonist, and he simply opened it and then wrote the emotional scene. This was very abrupt! Questions like this, and "he/she pursed her lips" also appear frequently, which may be related to the author's writing skills. The other is that several heroines have the same modal particles. Language is an important reflection of the character. Even if the heroines are all yandere, they are people with different personalities. I think the same modal particles should not be used to express their yandere characteristics. For example, when they have the yandere attribute, they always add 'Na' and 'Ne' in front or after the language. I think these do not reflect their respective yandere attributes. To sum up, the first article is amazing, and the subsequent ones can be read during the book shortage. I encourage the author to work hard!

It's good to read, but the main character has a lot of content in his heart, but after reading it, he seems to have missed it, and some words appear too many times, which makes reading a bit visual fatigue. Overall, it's okay. Come on, the author 🤭