There’s Something Seriously Wrong with My Campus Life

The plot development is very full, without any abruptness. Mr. Dan's younger sister has distinct characteristics and well depicts the cautiousness of secret love and the fear of unknown changes after expressing her feelings; the transition of the line of Master Xingman is very smooth and full of fun. However, both of them insert a little sadness into the overall sweet rhythm for individual reasons, but it is precisely this that makes their characters more three-dimensional. Finally, there is school beauty Lin. She seems to be progressing the fastest at the moment. I am looking forward to what Master Xingman will do after he discovers that Luo Jing is Shuying. I feel like this book will have at least 600 chapters based on the current pace. I am looking forward to the subsequent development, the story between the three female protagonists. Come on Mr. Dan, please update as soon as possible. It's not enough.

Brother, please, please update another chapter! One chapter, one chapter is fine. Please, I won't run away now. Brother, I'm really itchy. Please, I'm obedient. I'll never make trouble again. Please, brother, give me one chapter. I'm so itchy now. Please, brother, Just give it to me one last time. I beg you, bro. I'll give you whatever you want. Just give me a little more. I feel like there are ants crawling in my body now. It's so itchy. Brother, give me some. The last time, I swear, it's really the last time. 0(T~T)0

The author, just one request, please don't do 1v1. You can't lose both your sister and Qingchuan [crying]. If you do 1v1, there will be a plot of giving away the daughter. This is a novel, don't get into reality, okay? Let's discuss it, don't do 1v1. I saw a Shura field and I thought it was a nuisance, but your 1v1 made me very scared! The official certification is not just a single one, but multiple, directly directed to [smile][smile]

Coming to a happy ending, it must, must be like this. No matter how slow or detailed you write, it's okay. As long as it has a happy ending, five-star reviews are indispensable. Seeing that Chapter 360 is coming, how should I put it, the water injection is a little serious, the kind that does not affect the viewing of the plot at a glance. Moreover, Zhao and Lu's behavior was so ordinary that later on, Zhao's sadness could not even arouse my emotions. The main storyline was pushed too slowly, especially the water-filled daily text, which gave me a headache. There are too few positive and negative emotions. Most readers just find it boring and choose to give up. This leads to the situation I mentioned earlier. There are situations where there is no paragraph review in the next chapter. I hope the author can consider the choices of the article and the fluctuations of the plot line. (The novel itself has reached a good level in Tomato, the characters are no problem, and the materials are acceptable) It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to abandon it, and it's a bit uncomfortable @ Peerless Delicious Egg Custard

It's slower than my own love affair. There are many plots that can be written, but whether it is written or not has no difference to the overall story, and skipping it will have no impact on the emotional changes of the characters. The writing is smooth, but it slows down the progress. People who follow the update feel like they haven't read it after reading it every day. Four stars is reasonable.

It's okay. I feel that Lin's plot is not very well done. As the male protagonist, he is a bit too green. Too, how should I put it, that is, we should not blindly think about how to build a good relationship. We should make the male protagonist stronger, just to build a career. My sister and Xingman are portrayed quite well. Lin's words are a bit like one person. Sure enough, the abstract female personality is more prominent. Overall, it is good. Come on, come on.

If you want to create an engaging novel, it must have a plot with twists and turns. The author should not be too pretentious, otherwise it will be easy to give up without nutrition. Now that I have caught up with the latest chapter, I feel that DaDa has handled the plot very well. Although there are few people now, please stick with Da Da. I will update it every day.

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It's an ordinary and ordinary story, but the emotional details of the characters are described very well, and the details are well drawn. However, there are a few shortcomings. First, the intensity is increased directly at the beginning. It is a bit abrupt to be directly introduced into the story without any foreshadowing. The beginning of the chapter may have dissuaded many people. Secondly, the rhythm is quite chaotic, and sometimes it even feels like the timeline is extending infinitely, and you have no idea of ​​time. Thirdly, the emotional changes of the characters always have a process. There is a little bit of pavement for the emotional changes. The rapid changes of emotions make the readers unable to quickly reflect the emotional changes. There are less emotions projected on the readers. The readers only understand the emotional changes of the characters, but cannot feel the changes personally. The immersion is not very sufficient. The author has the ability to write better, and I look forward to the next great work.

There are more than eleven novels in this book so far. It is a real world. The author is great. I hope you can finish talking about it without being affected. If you get tired one day and can't write anymore, hand it over to AI so that the world can have an ending. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]