Secret-Realm Artificer: Forging a Thunder Army for China

The subject matter is great and attractive. The situation in the front is just right. To be honest, it is a bit depressing in the back. You can relax a little.

Overall, it's okay, but there is a very fatal mistake, which is that the repeated content appears too many times. Basically, a section of content will be repeated after a few chapters, and more than half of the previous chapter will be repeated in the next chapter.

You can be indifferent, you can be ruthless, but you can't be like a puppet and have nothing.

This is the evolution of God and the growth of man

You can watch it with your brain Good rhythm partial group portrait The protagonist cultivates talents one after another behind secret realms Heading to the battlefield of all races [laughing evilly]

The book is quite good, but I don't like depressing plots very much, and the tear point is low, so I skip those and just watch the plots where the protagonist appears and see how the protagonist behaves. Come on, the author. Also, has the author considered making a human god to comprehensively review it?

The writing is okay, but I think the plot is very affecting.

I'm giving it 5 stars for the time being. Although there are a lot of settings that are not explained and the writing is not very good, the storyline is very novel.

I feel like I can hope for more Warhammer related stuff.

It is already very good to be able to write like this for the first time in a group portrait article. Will the author always improve? I wish you better and better results in this book.