Lin Mo, an overworked office drone, dies suddenly and transmigrates into the 1980s, becoming Zhang Qingyun, a young Taoist priest from Mount Zhongnan. His master’s dying words and half of a broken jade pendant send him north by train. In his old Taoist robes, aboard the green train, he runs into a discharged soldier with eyes sharp as an eagle’s: Hu Bayi. When the two broken jade pendants fit together perfectly in Hu Bayi’s trembling hands, his shout of “Your father’s name is Hu Yunxuan?!” rings through the carriage. Zhang Qingyun is stunned: **Damn! Ghost Blows Out the Light is real! The tomb-raiding Hu Bayi is actually my biological older brother?!**
Following his brother and the boisterous Fatty Wang Kaixuan back to Beijing, Zhang Qingyun finds himself in Panjiayuan, where Big Golden Tooth’s gold teeth gleam as he produces three “Three Kingdoms tomb-raiding talismans.” The instant Zhang Qingyun touches them with his fingertips
**“Ding! Sign-in successful! Reward: Supreme Purity Great Cavern Scripture, Complete Taoist Talisman Compendium, Taoist magic infusion.”** In an instant, he sees through the fake talismans: “Cinnabar mixed with filthy blood. They’ve been buried for no more than three to five years!” His words leave Big Golden Tooth dumbstruck and Hu Bayi stunned!
From then on, the tomb-raiding trio becomes a quartet. Taoist talismans break illusions in the Ancient City of Jingjue, while ghost soldiers clear the way at Kunlun Shrine! Hu Bayi grabs his raised hand holding the Ghost Seal: “Little brother, are you sure this thing of yours won’t summon a warrant from the King of Hell?” Zhang Qingyun grins. “Don’t worry, brother. We’re the experts when it comes to dealing with what’s underground!” Armed with the Taoist magic System, the young priest stirs up the underground world.
Having read the first few chapters, the only problem is that the paragraphs are too long, making it tiring to read. Adding more paragraphs would be much better.
That's really well written, keep it up!