The Outcast: From the Start, I Become Zhang Lingyu's Lover

I'll give it four stars first. I think the relationship between the protagonists is too bland. A little more would be nice. So far, I don't see any poison. It's a very ordinary couple. The author couldn't have painted more of their relationship [crying] [crying] [crying] I want to eat meat! ! Soup is fine too! ! Don't pick! ! Now it seems that it should be a mutual attack

The setting is very cute, I just love watching two cold-blooded people team up for CP~ But the emotional line at the beginning is a little bit confusing, but I can automatically make up for it. Overall, the writing is very good, keep up the good work! ! !

The writing is very good, but who is on the left and who is on the right? ! !

I can actually enjoy the dual aloof persona! What kind of rice is this for me to take a bite of!

Well, it's obviously very well written. I read it almost today, and it probably only lasted an hour or so. I read Chapter 51 from the first chapter. Well, what I feel bad about is that it is clearly written as the main attack, and then there is a thunderstorm at the beginning, which is said to be the attack. , The result was a disappointment, it felt like I was tricking people into killing them. I commented on it when I saw Chapter 51. Uh, I think, uh, this could have been said earlier. If you are impatient or someone who prefers to focus on taste, it is quite off-putting to see this. But one thing I have to say is that the writing is really good, but the main storyline is a bit bland. If you are bored, or want to take a look at this kind of thing, you can still do it. The summary is like this. I haven't read the back part, but I think there should be more main plot descriptions in the back. I'm not sure. Is there any mutual work between Chu and Chu? But if it is written like this, it doesn't matter (I eat everything). I feel that I can change the introduction on the homepage. I have reviewed chapter 51, so I am not very clear about the rest. If I read it all for him today, I will talk about my feelings below.

Oh, they are really a young couple. They are so sweet. Ah, my heart was touched. In the front is Lingyu 1, and in the later stage is our little Nanxue 1. Oh, they are a sweet couple. The details are very well drawn in the process. They really love each other very much. The whole process is sweet and cruel. Our little Lingyu has also successfully accepted her own sinisterness. The project must be our Nanxue. Oh, it is true. There is a car in the 70th photo. Don't you guys really want to take a look? Come on, babies, come and see! [Shy][Shy][Shy][Flying Kiss][Flying Kiss][Flying Kiss] The author is great, come on more

This fanfic was originally written for me to read. It was mainly out of boredom and looking for something to do. I had been arguing about who was up and who was down. Later I stated that in my opinion 1,0, it is normal to have your own opinions. If you think it should be you, then I also think it is me. The first one also added my opinion. Some people also said that I cheated to kill, I am sick. If you don't like this type, you can read other ones. If you have time to argue, it is better to write something that suits you. Declare it in advance, if you don't like it, quit and watch what you like.

First of all, the protagonist in this world is invincible and can easily crush everyone. I still like Zhang Lingyu. Zhang Chulan and Lingyu were injured in the duel, so the protagonist takes the lead. It doesn't matter if he takes the lead, but Zhang Chulan doesn't admit defeat and keeps fighting. When he is injured, he will be restored with pills to continue fighting. I don't like this point, and my favorite baby is also like an ant in front of him. It's a bit weird, but come on, the author, the concept is quite unique.

I really like this book. It's so beautiful, but the number is too small. I need more authors. This kind of subject matter is really rare.

I came across this book by chance. I have never tried to read an article about Zhang Lingyu. Although I have watched the anime Under the Stranger, this book is really good now that I have read it. Good luck to the author.