Driving the Third Hokage Mad, the Tyrannical Uchiha!

The writing is really wonderful, especially the meat-eating at the beginning, which made me very comfortable to read [I learned] and I have the desire to continue reading [laughing evilly] [like] [like]

Overall, it's okay. The shortcoming is that in the early and middle stages, it feels like it's both self-contained and uncomfortably similar to the original. In the later stages, it's basically all self-contained and looks pretty good. Then there are dozens of chapters that are asking for good reviews, which is annoying to read too many times. The emotional scenes at the beginning are not good, but the writing is much better at the end. As for the other parts, the writing is quite good. It's a one-step show that doesn't overwhelm the fighting ability, and it's a satisfying ending to the harem. It's worth a read.

Very well written! It's refreshing and comfortable to watch! Unlike other Naruto stories, it's not hard to eat! Come on, author! Looking forward to your next story! I wish the author a great sale of his work!

If you like Naruto harem stories, you can read it. Although the plot is not satisfactory and the wording is quite lagging, it is still worth reading when you are short of books. The key is that it also has some pictures ~ [Laughing and crying]

Not bad, there is no green doppelgänger. The previous person commented that chapter 73 was there, so I went to read it, because it is true that there is chapter 100, but there is really no chapter 73. They must have been dazzled by it, and then I turned back to Chapter 100, which had a bit of green doppelgänger, and looked at it. There was a comment before that expressed dissatisfaction, and I found that the author had changed it. I gave it a five-star praise.

Not bad! Worth five stars, a little brainless, but still interesting. It's good to let Zhu Zhu know about the cancer.

The author has asked for 5 stars many times, so I will give it. After all, I have read it. Summarizing the harem story, the story of the daughter-in-law is basically unmarked. As for the plot, I think it is handled very well. Although I am Yun Hokage, at least the logic of the characters in the story is quite reasonable. Of course, if people who know the original work read it, they may not be able to accept it. After all, some characters have to be written to death. At the same time, from the perspective of other people, they may think that the protagonist always has his dreams come true (perhaps they think it is too smooth and lacks twists and turns in the plot). It also lacks the climax plot and the character's low period of ordinary novels. (For fan fiction, it is indeed a bit overwhelming. I can only hope that the author will work hard to improve his writing skills.) The shortcomings are personal. If you have different opinions, all viewers are right ~ I am a pure novice: The emotional line is a little thin, and it doesn't seem to conflict with the girl above, but if it does, it will be very fast, and the relationship will heat up very quickly. It's not impossible, but it's just a bit thin. (For example, although Gang Zi has been emphasizing the death of his younger brother and boyfriend, and strongly related to the conspiracy in the village, he directly started the education and training with Gang Zi. The author originally thought that you did not describe the process because you were afraid of Shen He. When I saw this, I thought maybe I didn't know how to describe it [facepalm]) I haven't read much, but I've read more or less everything. It's free to write a review, so I'll give it five stars as a reward.

The writing is good, the pace is fast, and it is not overwhelming.

I've read a lot of Naruto fan fiction, and I feel like this one is well written, and it's to my liking [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] There are pictures in every chapter, please give it a thumbs up

It's great, I just love watching this kind of thing, taking in girls, fighting the third generation, fighting Danzo