Making Doomsday Predictions? The Earth's About to Explode!

Tomato grass jelly level, no big problems so far. It's best to have a single female protagonist. I've seen many projects with multiple female protagonists that couldn't be controlled and collapsed. I'm convinced. Readers are here to watch a battle of wits with the God of Death and other weird things, where the weak defeat the strong. They are not here to watch the protagonist and a bunch of women having sex with each other.

The writing is very good, why is it only rated 7, especially the plot setting, which is quite interesting, but there are still some small problems, and the character creation is not interesting at all. Come on, author~ [Smile] Death Survival was originally a good idea, but now it's time to start a harem. I'm so disappointed. The protagonist has become impersonal, treating everyone as pawns, and has no personality charm at all. He's pretty good at pretending. I'm so disappointed. I'm leaving.

The setting draws on the world that is a fusion of Death Comes and other horror movies (with weird objects). The subject matter is novel. The protagonist also changes his mentality in the process of coming back again and again. From saving everyone at the beginning to only informing but not helping, he witnesses everything from a bystander's perspective. However, the ability to rewind after death does not seem to have any restrictions (there are restrictions, but not obvious, there is no cooling or anything like that), and it feels like the protagonist can even use force waves. In the later stage, I can no longer do it, I feel weak and very watery.

It's nice to read. In other similar books, although the protagonist is very powerful, he feels like he has no human emotions at all, and he doesn't look like a real person. However, the author of this book is very good in terms of details, logic, and emotional lines. The most important thing is that this book actually has emotional scenes, and it's so well written! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Shy]

The early stage was really great to watch, it was really tense, depressing and despairing. The protagonist tried and failed again and again to die and gambled his life. The layout was wonderful every time. The details of the characters and the plot were pretty good. Until he was reborn again after dying together with the Mirror Man in the Shenjing Base, it became more and more unbearable. It felt like it was not written by one person. Why is this? I don't care how many women you have. Can you bring back the atmosphere and feeling of the early stage? You want that brain-burning, desperate, oppressive and calculated feeling, and the early stage group portraits are really good. It's hard to describe in one word.

I've seen 74 so far, which is pretty good. It doesn't have any flaws for me. If I have to say it, the only time I chose inheritance instead of entry at level A is that it may bother some people. It's highly recommended. Why are you so toxic lately [laughing awkwardly]

It's a very interesting novel, I've finished it~ Let me analyze it for you, why is this novel not popular and the score is still low? First, what attracted me to this novel was the sense of oppression from the God of Death in the early stages. Being chased by the God of Death was that sense of oppression, rather than the mindless process of becoming an immortal like the zombie crisis in the middle. The writing in the middle period was so overwhelming, it felt like the author was writing wherever he dreamed, and writing wherever he thought. There was no pressure at all like in the early stage, and there was no motivation for me to chase. I was jumping to read it. In the later period, which is nearly 100 chapters, the writing is okay, the rhythm is back, and the oppressive feeling of being hunted by the doomsday is very satisfying. If you are a new reader, you can skip the middle part of the novel to see if it does not affect the plot. This novel is very good, I can't say it, but it is definitely not bad. There is definitely an upper-middle passing line. I hope the author will keep up the good work👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

It was so fun, a bit like death coming. The plot has a sense of tension and the pacing is well arranged. The first script is the best, but it gets more and more boring later on. There is no tension between life and death

"Little beauty, eat more, you are still growing." He gave Lin Yaya another piece of fish: "You too, your body has just recovered and you need to take some supplements." Finally, his eyes fell on Zhao Qianming, who looked at him and quickly smiled. After this operation, the originally stagnant atmosphere was really stirred up. Chi Sisi stuck out her tongue, whispered "Thank you, Brother Ling" in a low voice, and then started to eat. Lin Yaya also blushed slightly and nodded. This is the original text copied from Chapter 62. How should I say it? The book is okay, but there are many details that need to be polished. I personally suggest that the author can read it again from the perspective of the reader after writing a certain plot, which can effectively correct his article, or he can take the initiative to ask the readers what points everyone thinks are poisonous, and then make corresponding modifications. Some places may not be very poisonous, but if you add up, it will be easy to dissuade readers. (The above paragraphs are just some suggestions that I personally feel are slightly poisonous and then published. Please don't attack me, thank you🙏, give me a four-star support)

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