A Virgin's Life in Another World

The rhythm is very good, and it feels very warm and daily. The other heroines are full of love and hate, but this one made me, the Goblin Corpse, feel hot [Thoughts]

Those who were attracted by the cover==

Why haven't the protagonist and Zheng Yi been together yet? [Crying] We all know that we have feelings for each other. Don't let Zheng's mother become a dog or lose it. It's uncomfortable.

Sensually it's not bad, but Nan Chuxiao's emotional line is weird. The currently known people who are associated with Nan Chuxiao are Zheng Yi and Long Aoxue, and there are two other people, one is a "roommate" and the other is a "reborn person". Because the author did not clearly say whether there is one or more, this plot development seems to have multiple female protagonists, but the only one who is particularly familiar with Nan Chuxiao is Zheng Yi, and the same is true for the skin-to-skin relationship. Long Aoxue has met her a few times, so she is not very familiar with her. The girl who was reviewing was only a few words she said when she was caught, so she is not very familiar with her. The reborn girl only met and said a few words, so she is not familiar with her. According to the current feeling, the author should go through the strategies one by one (if it is a case of multiple female protagonists). If there is a single female protagonist, there is basically no suspense. Then I will see how it develops with Zheng Yi. The author does not say that it feels like it is easy to adjust later. It is almost 200,000 words. The timeline can be regarded as a little bit behind the middle period. The development of the plot depends on your personal sense. I think it is pretty good and worth watching.

Watch it, love it, write as much as you can. There are some things that I feel are not quite right, but I can tolerate it. Some of the ways the male protagonist pretends to be weak and fragile are a bit strange, but in a high-sounding sense, it is to live better in this world, but I always feel that the male protagonist is a bit too flowery. For example, when cooking and Shen Yun should call Shen Yun to investigate, the male protagonist is too relaxed. The male protagonist Xinzi is a college student and his parents have died without a sister. She should be able to cook when she has a room, which can be used to gain Zheng Yi's favorability. In terms of physical fitness, she can also exercise self-discipline to improve her appearance. Generally speaking, she is more like a vase that provides emotional value. She has not continued to do live video broadcasts to make money. When it comes to taking care of Zheng Le, she is more like a vase that Zheng Yi keeps at home. But overall, her faults are not concealed. She is much better than the heroine world. I haven't found any plots about yandere forcing love. Hope to keep up the good work! I finished reading it in an afternoon, and I only have one sentence for the author: drink milk tea when you have time, and code quickly.

Yes, but the author had better patch it up, high school students will be sanctioned by Shen He if they fall in love [eating melon]

Brain: No! What are you looking at! Eyes: Ouch! Hao Chi!

The age of 18 should be to pass the trial. The male protagonist should be 14-16 years old now, right?

Everything else looks great. It just felt a little weird being with that female police officer. The content of the school is particularly interesting. It would be great if we could be independent from the female police officers. Don't get involved with that kind of female police officer.

The novel is expected to be about a female protagonist, rather than a setting where men and women are swapped, but it is not entirely true. Zheng Yi plays a huge role in the plot. If you can accept the 33-year-old setting, you can take a look. The cover of the novel is not good, the plot is too daily, and plug-ins are of no use. Rating-★★★☆