[No System, no pairings] [Masks] [Demons] [The story enters the Honghuang setting later on] [Jackie Chan Adventures] [Honghuang]
What? You’re saying I’ve turned into Ximu, the Sky Demon?
And I start out in Hell? It’s still early in the story, too?
Isn’t that just terrible, kid?
After all that effort waiting for the Demon arc, I have to watch my demon brothers get sent back one by one?
Of course not. I’ll definitely have to pull a few strings.
? After being released by Shendu, the first thing I do is run away.
I went through so much trouble to get the last mask, only for you to tell me Basha has been sealed away too, and now it’s just him and Shendu left?
Shendu: “In that case, I’ll open my gate and let you all pass through.”
“? You’re saying someone’s already planning to open my gate?” Shendu looks utterly baffled.
The demons: “We’re back in Hell again. What do we do now?”
?: “Perhaps there’s another way.”
Yes, it's well-written and the content is logical and well-founded. I hope the protagonist can eventually unify power without any flaws or forced suppression of abilities.
It's well-written, with no major flaws and flows smoothly. However, I'm a bit worried about its future direction, and the sky is a little blurry. Overall, a good review.
Having read so many Jackie Chan Adventures fanfics, this one is truly excellent, a perfect score! Is the author planning to include a female lead? How about Jade?
It's been a long time since I've given a novel 5 stars, really. I didn't expect to give a fanfiction this. It's well-written, with basically no bad points, and the satisfying moments are given in a reasonable way. The writing style is quite smooth, and the foreshadowing and resolution are all very well done.
This is a high-quality fanfiction of Jackie Chan Adventures, with a top-notch plot and writing style. It's immersive and enjoyable, unlike those mindless wish-fulfillment novels where the protagonist is invincible for dozens of pages. This one, Ximu, is much better than those that are just constantly satisfying, as he plays cautiously in the beginning and then unleashes a powerful attack later on.
Honestly, this book is pretty good, with no major flaws. It jumps from Jackie Chan's adventures to the prehistoric era, featuring eight demons united. Fans of Jackie Chan adventures and prehistoric fantasy novels might want to check it out. The low rating is probably due to someone intentionally inflating it.
Why do so many people like to criticize this book? I think it's pretty good. I can understand some of the plot points, like who wouldn't want to increase their trump cards? Regarding the later prehistoric world, I hope Hongjun is a good person and not a conspiracy theorist, because conspiracy theories can't always be self-consistent. So far, everything seems fine, but why does the Water Demon seem so dull and socially awkward? Is there any foreshadowing behind this?
It's alright so far, I'll give it four stars for now, and wait and see how the story unfolds. [Understood]
It's alright, readable, but there's not much writing yet, so the future plot is hard to guarantee.
It's very well written; at least so far there are no major flaws. Keep up the good work, author!