Ben 10: Wielding the Omnitrix, I Take on Marvel

It's really good, and the characters are very realistic. Okay, I don't know what some people in the comments are saying about being decisive and ruthless. Where is Ben Tennyson decisive and ruthless? Are they referring to the future Ben they met when he was ten? Isn't that Ben after the events of Total Evolution?

So far, things seem alright. Ben's combat strength is quite high; he can dodge bullets with his bare hands and avoid being suppressed from behind. Also, in the scene where he helped Tony, why didn't he use Crab Armor Strategist and the Little Riders? Ben is just lazy, not unintelligent; he would definitely find a solution.

It's alright. The characters didn't go too far in terms of personality. As for the combat power, well, that's a common problem for novel authors. After all, they are two completely different worlds. If you compare combat power, it's hard not to make the story fall apart. Setting is setting, and presentation is presentation. It's very common for animation to falter.

All I can say is, don't join S. H. I. E. L. D. Those who dislike Mary Sue characters should not watch.

This is the best Ben Ben fanfiction I've ever read. As a die-hard fan of The Matrix, I was really sad that it ended with "Show Your Power Again." I've always wanted to find a book that continues Ben's story. The characterization of Ben is truly excellent, perfectly embodying what it means to be a hero. I hope the author can draw inspiration from the characterization in "ben10 5yl."

This is amazing! It's the best Ben10 fanfiction I've ever read online, bar none. The portrayal of Ben is incredibly vivid, and the Marvel character descriptions are also very fitting. It's unlike other fanfiction where the protagonist is just a pretentious overpowered character with a watch.

What else is there to say, bro? You deserve 5 stars. However, I feel Ben's combat power was slightly nerfed, but of course, combat power serves the story, so I understand. His personality is a bit different from the Ben I remember from Total Evolution, but he's still pretty good.

It's a great read. The writing style is perfect for a small class, with the humor and wit of a typical small class, and it's not awkward at all. The story is also very interesting. I hope the author can finish it! I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story!

Yes, it's definitely one of the best fanfics with such a rare theme. Author, did you consider including other super alien heroes, like in the fanfic "5 Years Later" or scrapped projects/stage plays?

The character designs are incredibly faithful to the source material; you can tell the author has a good grasp of the characters. The writing style also has a strong American comic book feel, without any messy Chinese writing habits. It's much better than many other American comic book stories I've seen!