Honkai: Star Rail: Playing Bai E, Shocking Bai Yue Kui

Personally, I feel that the world of National Games is very barren and is better than some similar works. I originally thought that when I unlocked the first power, I was given a hoe, but I didn't expect that I was given a hoe. Although it didn't hold up, it was a surprise.

That's good, but can we control the barrage? I really don't want to watch cross-circle group cp(･_･)ﾉ⌒●~*

It seems fine so far, I've seen chapter 48. It's just that I personally feel that Jeppard's character design is too OOC, especially the psychological description of Jeppard, which feels completely out of character for Geppard. I think Brother Jie is an extremely serious person who has his own judgment when it comes to business matters, but he can be a bit clumsy in life and small things. He seems to be a contrasting and humane person. Children, I am convinced. Not only Jeppard, but also other characters are not the same person as Yuan Bengtie. Jeppard is the most obvious, and Shiluva is also a character. As one of the former Belloberg leaders, he first sent a letter to the protagonist because of Star Core's intelligence. Well, the protagonist directly knocked out Cocolia and took him away, and forced his way into the Belloberg Supreme Command. Sylva still believes in the protagonist. I feel that Sylva's feelings for Beloberg are just like that. The protagonist is an alien from the outside. This is somewhat intellectual. The only one that is better is Cocolia. Maybe it's because the villain has been cleared. I can see Cocolia's courage and determination as the great guardian. This is also the case in other novels, at least I have read it and haven't written it. This is very well written.

6. The author is very NB, it has just been taken off the shelves. On the shelves again [Like]

It is rare that a national destiny story has a lot of its own things. So far, there are not many classic national destiny essays that have the false national complex. This is good. The focus is on the story rather than the national destiny. Keep it up. Do patriotic emotions really need to be vented by so-called national destiny documents? This must be negative. The strength of a country never relies on the ignorance and boasting of its enemies. If it really falls back to the traditional destiny of the country, I will come back and change the points. The point of deducting stars is that the details are not well controlled. Considering that it is a level issue, I only deducted one star.

After reading a bit, I feel pretty good, but when describing the appearance of a character, there is no need to describe how beautiful or handsome that person is. Describe the general appearance of him (her, it, him), and the rest of the readers will figure it out on their own. I feel that it is comfortable to watch. Otherwise, the author's description of Boss Bai is a bit... Indescribable. Although the author said that there is no cp, there is still a feeling that she is the heroine. I hope it is a pure friendship.

You can write more plots about Bai E and Boss Bai, and less about foreign players (๑> <๑)

The plot is very interesting, and the pure combination content without CP is also very interesting. Please speed up the update! I want to see what a whiteboard novice can do.

Overall it's good, no cp but a bit ambiguous, single recommendation for Bai'er Jieji/Sister Bai'er Jieji's cp, run quickly

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders to the north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, but love is no match for holding on to tears Destined to succeed or fail, the Immortal will regret it but I will not. I knew at an early age that things were going to be difficult, but I was still able to fly like a hero among the clouds. The cold wind feels like wadding all the way, and the fate of the sea is ups and downs, and the traveler walks alone A sword is forged with painstaking efforts and painstaking efforts. Now the sword is pointing at the clouds, refining Gu, refining people, and refining heaven The ancient emperors and immortals passed away with the wind, and the three kings of the past returned to Qingzhong Who do you think the sheep and the Han say, I worship, come back and claim the throne again Fishing for dragon fish in the Tianhe River, going against the will of heaven and walking alone in Gu Bahuang Let's spread our wings today. Tomorrow, we will ascend to heaven and eat phoenixes.