Scissor Seven: I'm Only Doing This for World Peace

Generally speaking, the writing is good, but it is a common problem. The protagonist is always on the road to failure. Other deflated plots are only superficial at most, but the author is quite bold and uses the protagonist's life to defy the plot. Very good, keep persevering and write out your personal characteristics [eating melon]

It's such a good second chapter. Every time, the protagonist is about to die, and then explodes, some thunder disaster comes, a magic weapon is born, and blood debts are repaid with blood.

Invincible, Xiao Baiwen, the world of assassin Wu Liuqi talks about peace and justice? Funny, there is no guarantee of peace and justice in the real world, let alone the world of 5, 5, 6, and 7, where people kill without blinking an eye. Do you plan to slaughter everyone in the world?

Some parts are suddenly forcibly sensational, and the protagonist's emotions before and after are too absolute, which greatly affects the reading experience. For example, about Granny Chen, the first part is too absolute, describing her as a heinous crime, and then the second part suddenly becomes sensational. The protagonist makes people feel that she is both responsible and upright, especially because she has not wasted her time in defeating her ability. Just like there is a bad thing that affects everyone, if you are able to solve it, you are a righteous person, but if you are not, you are a clown. The protagonist gives the impression that he is both cool and upright, a sensational clown who likes to point fingers, which gives people a very bad impression. Especially the protagonist and Granny Chen are obviously determined to die. They even say that she is not worthy of death, so they still go to save her. Do you think this is modern, especially when you can't defeat the other party? Isn't this looking for death?

It's a bit overwhelming.

A very well written fan novel. I have read many fan novels, and this one ranks second among all the fan novels I have read. Great author, come on! Very well written, keep it up. The support keeps coming and the gifts keep coming! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

No one can beat him in front of him. He relies on trickery and deception to do everything. He has no morals in small things and is a bitch in big things. If you want to treat me to a meal, why don't you tell me that you only have 100 yuan? Then you go to pay after ordering and eating and find out that it is more than 1000 yuan. Then you refuse to pay and let others pay, and you just run away. The lie was discovered and you broke your bones. I thought in my heart that a sneak attack could kill him directly, but I was kind-hearted and didn't hit anything. Why don't you just kill him and injure him? I have so much fighting power that I have to fight you to the death and still do this. Also, this system mission must have a protagonist who is both responsible and upright. For the mission of Wang Crazy, wouldn't it be better for you to join in and stop 567 later on? I will tell you later that you are also a good person, and 567 will not kill you. If you are injured, you can also make the protagonist group miserable. I support you if you want to write an original plot, but with the protagonist's current strength, I don't think it will be very interesting.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but I didn't have a good experience while watching it. The main reason is because I have a different state of mind. I came to read the cool novel. It's okay if you have a brain. But now there is a problem. The writing has indeed improved. He gives me the feeling that he felt like the protagonist of The Legend of the Condor Heroes decades ago. But the key is that he is a time traveler. Although he is not omnipotent, he He thinks too little. Although he has a plan, it is a general direction. There is no deep-seated silence. He is always being calculated. His whereabouts are never unknown. Even the protagonist does not have a hiding place, let alone a mask or something. It is always placed in the open. The emotional scenes are a bit slow, and I don't want to watch other people's emotional scenes. It always feels a bit awkward (இωஇ ).

It looks good. Tomato originally had more than 56 female protagonists in Assassins. This book is really to my liking. However, I asked the author if he wants to accept Coca-Cola later and the part about the prince at the beginning can be changed.

Very pretty [eating melon]