The Broken String

It's a super nice article. It's written in a big way and it's really to my liking. I really like this kind of sickly and bloody writing, and it's also cruel. I like it so much. I strongly support it and continue to update it! I will always follow your great [admiration]

Only now did I think of writing a book review in private Marseille [awkward laugh] I really like reading sadistic stories. This book written by the teacher is very suitable for my appetite. I really like sadistic stories! But there aren't many such books. . The emotions, thoughts and actions of the two are described superbly, and the writing is superb!! [Top post] There are some descriptions of some medical aspects. I wonder if the teacher studied this field (privately, the Marseille junior high school students did not learn these, maybe it is because my knowledge is shallow 🧐) The teacher is also great, he feels super gentle, and he is a very good baby [loving] [laughing] I really read comments and replies carefully. In short, the teacher writes with confidence. I love the setting of the sick and the sick, and I love the teacher too. I will keep reading the new books 😜 [top post] ❤️ [KISS] If it's one less star, I think Zhou Jingming is a scam 🧐 I thought Lu Yanshen would take revenge on him, but I still praise the teacher for his good writing [I also strongly recommend]

The writing style is quite good, so there should be a lot of room for improvement. It feels like a practice writing, purely sadistic and emotional, without a very strict plot development. For the current female novel market, the pace is too slow, the adjectives and description techniques and the rhetoric are too piled up, which makes it very procrastinating. There is no deep plot and the exciting points of the subsequent plot are not buried, causing readers to lose their expectation and patience to read on. If you want to write a long-form sadomasochistic novel, it usually has to have a bad plot and more fleshed-out supporting characters and protagonists. In fact, it is better to write a sour sadomasochistic short story. If the sadomasochistic story has the excitement of chasing your wife in the crematorium, a fast pace is more suitable. The writing style is okay, but less descriptions of scenery will speed up the pace and make people less tired. And because it is an online novel, readers pay more attention to the characters and plots. The female channel focuses on the development of the emotional line, the pull and entanglement of the story, and does not think deeply about the meaning of the sentences. It would be better if the sentences are easy to understand and the main meaning is deep. I feel that I have a strong literary foundation and writing style. I look forward to the next book and the future is promising.

😢 Among the few BE stories, the emotions are always sour. Lin Xian faced death, but he also stood at the top of life. Their love was so short-lived, because he was short-lived and time was not good for him. Therefore, he shed everything, grew the wings of freedom, and stood at the end waiting for his husband.

Two men, two men, two men, no flesh in the whole process, it should be the perspective of the master and the slave, both strong, sick and weak, once imprisoned and abused. Leukemia + stomach problems + misanthropy + anorexia. The betrayal and misunderstanding were finally resolved. Be the ending! It's super sadistic, with lots of descriptions of illness and frailty!

It's so good-looking!!!! The author has a Guinness record of typing out 807 letters per minute. Assuming that each Chinese character requires six letters, he can type out approximately 134 words per minute. Since you're not the record holder, let's count on 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a healthy sleep time for individuals is eight hours. You spend about two hours each day eating. Use another 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to generate inspiration, and another hour to fish in a daze. It should take nine hours to type, and you can type 435,780 words. Based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters. But you only put so much content every day. To be honest, author, are you skimping? Author, get up and type quickly.

It's good to read. I just like this kind of cruel misunderstanding story. Real life is so satisfying that I just want to shed some tears.

I like it, I like it, it's so satisfying to me. The author will update it soon. I'm going to run out of food 🥺 🥺 🥺 God, I'm so tortured to death, I can't bear to 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

It's really good-looking, and I saw the word "urge to update" before I knew it 🤭 It suits my taste. I haven't read such a good-looking novel in a long time. The author should update it quickly. I'm going to starve to death.

It's so cruel, Lin Xian is so miserable, it would be great if the misunderstanding back then could be resolved, Lu Yanshen is a complete fool! If Lu Yanshen could believe him, would everything be different... But there is no if in reality. I really want to see their sweet life after rebirth.