Shen Yan transmigrated into a cultivation novel and became a minor character who wouldn't survive past chapter three.
To stay alive, he had no choice but to cling to Xie Cangming, the story's biggest antagonist.
Who could have guessed the antagonist's cultivation partner would turn out to be him?
Xie Cangming's gaze was deep and inscrutable. “Did you approach me just to save your own life?”
Shen Yan backed away step by step. “It's a misunderstanding! It's all a misunderstanding!”
“A misunderstanding?” Xie Cangming pinned him against a tree. “Then let me see who you really are.”
Only after the truth came out did Xie Cangming learn that Shen Yan was the only person who knew the script of the Heavenly Dao.
And he himself was nothing more than a puppet controlled by the Heavenly Dao.
When Xie Cangming slaughtered his way through the sect, determined to rewrite Shen Yan's destined death...
Shen Yan sacrificed himself to the Dao, giving him a chance to live.
“This time, let me save you.”
There are too many modifiers that don't focus on the highlights, and it feels like I'm just trying to make up the word count.
You write too much narration.
Good writing, but procrastinating
The plot is complete, but it feels inconsistent and disconnected.