Zenless Zone Zero: Where the Silver Falls Silent

The writing is okay, but some parts feel strange. The main reason is that there is too little daily life. Ailian is a high school student and has to go to school every day. She also has a few best friends who get together from time to time. Normally, she does commissions during school and holidays. Kelin seems to be a junior high school student and has after-school homework. Lina's own maid family origin and cooking hobby, as well as Victoria's housekeeping, are also listed under the normal housekeeping association. Laikan will also participate in the full moon party with the Wolf hope people. I have read dozens of chapters so far. It seems that all the members are huddled in the courtyard except for doing commissions. Apart from the interactions in the courtyard, the rest are basically battle commissions. Maybe some daily plots can be added later? Just suggestions of course.

It's nice to look at, but it's not easy to read in large sections. Does the author have a CP for this book? Or is it just about friendship and healing?

The writing is very good and the rhythm is very coherent. I feel that the author does not sound like a local. It would be nice if there could be more 😭

Please break it down into more sections, my eyes hurt 😭

I really like the setting and so on, and the content is okay, but the paragraphs are too! Long! Got it! ! !

Ninety-nine percent, rare thing [laughing evilly] One chapter in 2 to 3 days? [Smile]

It looks good, but the paragraphs are a bit long.

The writing is good, but the author is missing

It's really well written, it would be nice if it could be broken down into paragraphs.

It is recommended to divide it into several paragraphs, and the language can be a separate paragraph.