Pregnant and on the Run in the 1970S, the Commander Chases His Wife to the Crematorium

This is my book, hehe, I come here to give high marks based on my own selfishness. My narrative rhythm is not particularly fast. I just want everyone to understand Wanqing's psychological changes step by step. Gu Ye is a very contradictory person. In his previous life, because Wanqing was cowardly and incompetent, he regarded her as a "xy" tool. But facing Wanqing, who has 40 years of life experience and has become outstanding, he can't help but be tempted. You can comment on whether he is good or bad.

I called the author. The author works very hard on the article and will update three chapters a day. It's just that sometimes the character in the article is very contradictory. I want to write one kind of plot, but focus on describing another thing that is opposite to him. I feel that the focus is wrong. For example, the heroine is going to divorce Gu in the future, but she has always focused on describing Gu's changes. The heroine was moved by Gu's help boiling water, but in fact, the things Gu did are what a couple who gets along with each other normally should do, right? He just changed from a cold and violent man to a more considerate person, but it makes people feel that Gu is very good, and the female protagonist seems to be ignorant. Because there are too few descriptions of the sufferings of the heroine in her previous life (a person who knows nothing and comes to a strange environment, the suffocation of being looked down upon and isolated, the heartache of being ignored and distrusted, the pain of no one to tell, the sadness of raising a child alone, the powerlessness of being bullied but not understood) are not written, so it makes people feel that the past life is something that can be easily forgotten and forgotten. But the things that happened in the past life are still mentioned, which will make many people think that the heroine is pretentious, and even feel sorry for Gu. They feel that Gu and the heroine's mistakes in the previous life are equal, so why does the heroine never forgive her? But the fault of the heroine you mentioned should only be the heroine's character and the influence of the environment. What is the difference between a husband who comes back and only knows rough possession and a rapist? Who dares to speak to him? How will the heroine have the chance to understand him? Hehe, a useless person who can't even notice his wife's suffering. These things will look very contradictory, readers will not be able to grasp the focus, and there will be a lot of "grievances" due to bad comments. Come on, author, it should only be five stars to get extra points.

Very well written! The writing is clear, and the author has well-founded knowledge of all relevant plots in the article, has in-depth practical experience, and is highly professional. Very exciting! But! To be honest, I don't like Lin Wanqing, the protagonist in the book, because he is too selfish. She is a time traveler, but she brings what she suffered in her previous life to the future to take revenge on the doctor who has brought her real benefits in every way and loves her and her son deeply. He tore apart a good home for his own selfish desires. Of course I haven't seen the ending yet.

I like it, it looks good! Many scenes have a sense of substitution. I graduated from high school in 1980, and the background is the era of my youth. I was born and raised in Guangzhou, and later worked in a central enterprise. I was considered an active and fashionable generation at that time. Although the descriptions in the book cannot be 100% restored, the descriptions of the current situation and scenes are very real. The writing in the book is smooth, the characters are vivid and natural, and it is comfortable to read! Big hugs to the author, awesome! Like! ! !

Can you still want this kind of man?

The content is substantial and the plot is touching and beautiful. I give this book a thumbs up and a round of applause.

The writing is true and the sentences please be clear. Nice

It's beautiful. If tired can really be reborn, I would rather be reborn now

I hope we can get back together in the end

It's really, really good-looking. The heroine is really determined after her rebirth.