My Jianghu Begins in the Lijuzhutian Grotto-Heaven

It's so good. I hope there will be more interactions with the female characters, so as to complete "the great road should not be so small, and the Taoist companions should not be so few". Jian Lai's novel is finished, and it's time for the fandom to appear. I hope to write more and not be a eunuch (Jian Lai-Lan Lai)! ! !

With such a great avenue, there shouldn't be so few lovers It's so well written that I can't cheer you up [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Except for some typos, but nothing serious, it's a good new book Don't break it, it's good. One more thing, I hope there will be more female protagonists. Since this is a fanfic, there should be no regrets.

This is the kind of fanfic I want to read. Unlike other time-travelers who are afraid of this and that. If you don't have the ability to have the ability and still have to compromise, it is really a waste of a chance to live a new life and a golden finger. There are also those who can't change the original work and can't tear down the CP. Why don't you just read the original work?

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, very good looking. Doesn't the protagonist have a name? He's always called a young boy? There is more than one person calling the boy, is it chaotic?

Come on, it's very beautiful. I'm already asking for book promotion.

Except for the lack of content, this is the best Jianlai novel I have ever read.

Not bad, not bad

The plot line described throughout the article is very good. 1The image of each person and the character of this character have changed, but they are generally the same. Maybe it's just what the plot needs and demand needs. 2. The main thing is that I can't understand the heroine at the moment. There are just too many. My emotional lines are very mixed now. Although in the original work, Chen Ping'an and these characters have some emotional descriptions and lines, here the relationship between each female protagonist and our original male protagonist is written too clearly, and it is afraid that it will be difficult to distinguish and narrate it later. 3. The writing style is okay. It is very close to the original writing style of Jian Lai. It does not write in a very plain way, but the writing has this kind of beauty. If I read this novel intuitively, I think it should be ok to give it a score of 8.5 Or above. As long as the emotional line and the plot line are tightened later, I think it will be very good. Like the author [like]

It is considered an excellent Kenlai fanfic. It can be called a masterpiece at the beginning, but the quality drops a little bit later, but it is still considered a basic work. Because the author is relatively busy at work, it is normal for the quality to drop. It is understandable and I recommend you to read it.