Honkai: Star Rail: Astonishing Wisdom Strikes Again

The description of the Immortal Ship [Yaoqing] is good; I hope the storyline of the Abundant War can be expanded. I don't care about plot details; I'll just appreciate the amazing stuff the developers have created in the game's text. PS: Could the content and feelings in parentheses be placed at the end? They slightly affect the reading experience.

I hope you can reduce the amount of text in parentheses and the author's comments; these greatly affect the reading experience. I strongly hope you can reduce them! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

This old polar bear's writing is indeed quite good, but it feels like Feixiao's role is a bit small.

Great, that's powerful, and the logic is very clear, unlike some authors who write fanfiction without even understanding the setting and character personalities. 👍 Honestly, it's pretty ridiculous. This is Yangshizi, not one of those other paid platforms. You're happy to watch something for free, and if you really find the content in parentheses annoying, you can skip it. We're not forcing you to watch it. 😅😅

Your writing is actually quite good, but you use too many parentheses, and many sentences are unnecessary. The plot devices are well arranged, but I suggest you check the characters and their information in the game. I don't know if you've read everything before, but after you told me, I went back and looked through the previous parts. A lot of your work wasn't completely deleted or revised.

The main character is female, and she's paired with Fei Xiao... Something feels off. (It seems the author is trying to preemptively publish the short reviews in the main text, leaving readers with nowhere to read! Those who enjoy short reviews might not mind, but those who prefer immersive reading will find it annoying.) Keep it up, author!!! Bang bang bang! The main character is actually a guy! (Why isn't it Nan-niang? Look at the character design, she's dressed like that... (Daily crazy jpg))

It seems alright so far. I understand giving Bloria her highlight, but I strongly disagree with nerfing Star by banning her Preservation Fate. Couldn't you have given Bloria the Stone and Star the Flame Lance, putting their highlights together? Preservation Fate is quite powerful in the story, and it's used extensively in later team battles.

Well written, it's my type. There are too many fanfics these days that focus on the main plot and excessive sexual content; I really can't understand the point of authors writing fanfics that drag in the main storyline. I'd give this one 5 stars as long as it doesn't add any more explicit content later on.

I feel like a new author, as they like to insert their own comments into the main text, but they write quite diligently.

Although the author frequently inserts various rants into the main text, the research is very detailed, and the writing is relatively smooth. It's suggested that the author save the rants for the end of the article and polish it further; otherwise, it just feels like a river flowing eastward without any substance.