The Widow and Her Loyal Young Uncle-in-Law

Chapters 109 to 117 are so well written that I feel very excited. Yes, since ancient times, knowledge has changed destiny. I have never doubted that I am also a beneficiary. I can make my life better and better through my own hard work. I thank God, the country, and myself for working hard.

It's good to watch, but the heroine's mother-in-law always forces the heroine. Although the background is that, it's still a bit frustrating. The male protagonist has a very good character, he is careful, he is good at reading, he gains fame step by step, and he protects his family. Dalang is also the existence of Bai Yueguang [almost crying], and he soon tied up with Wuwuwu.

It's well written, the language is delicate, and the plot logic is okay. The flaw I personally think is that the pace of plot development before the male protagonist's spring is a bit too slow. You may want to solve the psychological conflicts between the male and female protagonists in a similar way: "As time goes by, the heroine's mentality changes, a guide enlightens, and she faces her heart." However, there is too little psychological description, and the main plot is not promoted in the early stage. As a result, the early stage is relatively smooth, or the emotional changes are a bit stiff, so I feel that it is not performed well. In short, the plot development and emotions are a little inconsistent. Personally, I feel that the psychological description of the heroine should be appropriately added in the early stage, especially the psychological changes. It is best to add some psychological narration from a subjective perspective. For example, the heroine looks at Dalang's tomb and thinks to herself, "I will definitely live well with your expectations. You don't have to worry, Erlang treats me very well." The focus is on "I", that is, Yuniang's subjective thoughts, which can deepen emotional expression and enhance emotional conflicts. This may be better. I feel that the original plot may be a bit like a dumpling-style resolution of conflicts [face covering] Of course, when I wrote the book review, it was still more than 40 chapters away from the latest, which means I had read about 130 chapters. If there is any foreshadowing for the follow-up, I didn't mention it. The book review only represents my feelings after reading this. But it's just a suggestion, don't think too much. Overall, the writing is quite good. There are no fancy words, but the narrative is relatively clear. I like Junxiu's language style better. The characters of the male and female protagonists are also good. I hope to continue to work [like][like][like]

Told without haste or slowness, this novel is like a gurgling stream, carrying daily trivialities and warmth. With delicate and beautiful writing, it gently spreads every bit of the protagonist's life in front of readers, allowing people to taste the tranquility and comfort of the years between the lines.

The characters of the male and female protagonists are pretty good. The male protagonist "does whatever it takes" for the female protagonist and the female protagonist is torn between morality and ethics. The author describes the psychological activities of the male and female protagonists with ups and downs, and recommends it to everyone [laughing]

The author's writing is very good and the plot is reasonable. I don't know why the rating is not high. Except for the fact that the male protagonist was a little bit dishonest in order to be with the female protagonist at the beginning, the rest is simply perfect. Highly recommended. The author will update it soon!

I want to write this book review in two parts. The first paragraph is my overall evaluation, and the second paragraph is my opinion on some characters or writing methods. This is a slow-paced novel with extremely detailed emotional progression and a twist that is completely in line with the characters. Taking the emotional line as the main line, starting from the perspective of an ordinary ancient, he gradually gains fame and conquers his brother and sister-in-law. But it's not just about love. For example, in the part about the plague, you can see that the author placed ordinary people's desire for hope (the court in this book is not the focus, and the portrayal is not very comprehensive. It only leaves an authoritative and bright image). For now, I think that what can be seen at 9 points is now low. The author has also written that the two of them opened up. If the current writing style does not collapse and does not write about some bad street slaps and doting on the wife, my suggestion is not to prolong it too long, as it will easily end (I have already seen some of the signs, but the author mentions them in one stroke, and it is not annoying). At present, the next plot of this book that I am most looking forward to is when the secret love from childhood is revealed (of course, there may not be) Also, I noticed that some book friends think that the character of Zhao's mother as a "loving son, a traditional country person, and a bit of a philistine" is not likable, and because of this, the way she forces the heroine again and again is annoying. In terms of characters, I think this is inevitable. The existence of Zhao's mother is largely to preserve Yu Niang's character and promote the development of the story. Moreover, such a character can make people more immersed in the situation. After all, life itself cannot always go as planned. Having such an independent character is the highlight of this book. But I really don't like the plot of forcing the heroine. But it has to be said that it is very reasonable, and the heroine's emotional transitions step by step are also traceable, and the layers are very detailed. Overall, this is a rare masterpiece in Tomato. I like the author's outline, but in my personal opinion, the author is still far from full marks in terms of writing skills.

The story is told smoothly and the characters' IQs are online. The male protagonist is portrayed very well, almost unrealistically. But after all, it is a novel. It is normal to be idealistic. It's just that Yu Niang's character is too thin, and I don't feel her charm. But this entangled relationship is very frustrating, haha.

Maybe many people don't understand it. In northern China, there have been too many cases of brothers-in-law marrying sisters-in-law who suddenly died in battle. In the old society, ordinary landlords would not take this sentiment into account.

Erlang is really good, but it's a pity that the heroine doesn't like him. I hope Erlang succeeds in his rise to power. After all, he worked very hard to get it.