Walking the Fine Line of the Shattered Immortal Venerable's Corruption

The introduction is okay, the story continuity is okay, the pace is fast and I am very satisfied. Some paragraphs in the full text are too long, which affects the reading. The heroine's character and thinking are very provocative, but why the hero has the word "Yun" is very strange. It is really inconsistent to be a cultivator and a scholar.

The writing style of this book is actually on par with 9.5+, But the plot is sometimes tight and the emotional scenes are a bit confusing. I look forward to the author's next book. This book is quite interesting and interesting.

Overall, it's quite enjoyable to read. It's a cute little sweet story. For me, there's nothing wrong with it. The female protagonist is not the Holy Mother, and the male protagonist is righteous, but I don't think it's the Holy Father. There may be some flaws in some places, but the holes have been filled in. Anyway, I read it smoothly. The author's descriptions are often very visual, which is good.

It's also very interesting to watch, and it develops very quickly. There's nothing deep about sadomasochism, like Return to Heaven. There is no misunderstanding either. It's just that the ending feels a bit rushed

Haha, return it to the Emperor of Heaven. Isn't the Emperor of Heaven only the Jade Emperor? The book is good, no matter what you do, it will work. However, the article is indeed well written. The heroine can return to the divine position for her lover, and she must help her return to her rightful place regardless of misunderstandings. The ending is not bad either. Worth a look

Why are there so few people reading such a beautiful book [Sending Hearts]? [Almost crying] It's not enough. I've read all the previous updates. [Crying] There are not many books to read recently.

I like it. Why is the rating so low? It's unscientific. I feel like it's well written. The plot is fast. It's fun to read. It's a pure and refreshing article.

It's okay, the heroine has a very good character, not the Virgin, it would be better if the plot was not so cliche and had to have white lotus and moral kidnapping.

Not bad for a short story, the story is compact

Easy reading experience