Daocheng Haruka suddenly discovered that he could see numbers above other people’s heads. For a moment, he thought he had floaters and that the Trisolarans were about to set their sights on him.
[Urgent, online now: Why can I suddenly see countdowns?]
[Oh, Kami, so I’m Light Yagami!] Yeah, right!
I don’t want to become the Kami of a new world!
Wait, is this really Beika Town, where the local customs are so pure and simple?!
Yikes, there’s the Grim Reaper Conan, and now I’ve got the Shinigami’s eyes. Mystery solved: this is the world of the Death Note.
I forgot to ask: how do I defuse this thing that looks like a bomb and has a countdown too?
I've read part of it, and the content is pretty good. I'd like to give you a suggestion. The introduction and cover should be a little more gimmicky, otherwise no one will read it. Also, the pace of the opening chapter is a little faster, so I recommend giving some more information about the protagonist.
Regarding the errors in the original timeline, there are two in Chapter 18. The first one is the one on Tsukikage Island. Aso Masayoshi went to Tsukikage Island three or four years ago before the plot line started. The first person to die was Kameyama Isamu who mistakenly thought he was coming to take revenge on them because he saw Asaga's appearance three years ago. He told everything, and only then did Aso know this. Then Kameyama Isamu died of a heart attack. Three years later, at the third anniversary ceremony of Kameyama's death, Aso killed the remaining people one by one, and finally committed suicide. The second one is that Miyano Shiho already knew that Morohoshidai = Akai Shuichi = Miyano Akemi's ex-boyfriend, Vodka said. When Akai Shuichi failed to escape as an undercover agent, he told Miyano Shiho this like a show off, and when Miyano Akemi and Miyano Shiho met later, there would always be a formal member of the organization present. What Miyano Shiho didn't know was that Shuichi Akai was just their cousin.
I've read Chapter 60 and the author's writing is great. It's cheating for cheats, but it's not like those routine upgrade articles that look the same. The case is also very interestingly written. As long as you keep updating it, it will be a rare and good article. (And I didn't pretend that every girl in the central air conditioner would fall in love with it after seeing it. Or that the two men were intentionally ambiguous). He didn't intentionally abuse the protagonist either. Well worth a look.
There is a high probability that there will be no heroine, and that's acceptable, as long as it's not a harem.
It's a good book, it's interesting, and it's a bit novel (meaning it doesn't involve the protagonist in various subplots in each episode), and the system is not the kind of mindless and invincible book that marries Xiao Ai, and... This one is called Conan... Brother Nan... [Laughs evilly]
Not bad, quite interesting, experience knowledge plus script. The inspiration should come from the movie where you can see the remaining lifespan of smoking to save your wife and Tang Tanli's Q organization. The combination is not awkward, come on👏
Good, good, good
The author's writing is very beautiful, and the writing style is also good, but it is a bit short and I can't read enough. Come on, author.
It's very beautiful. It's Xinran 💕!!!
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