Naruto: I Gained Critical Hits and Turned the Ninja World Upside Down!

As the wind sweeps over Konoha and past Hokage Rock, the name of a dead-last is being carved into the stone monument of ninja-world legends: Hoshino, the civilian boy once mocked for “not even being able to spit out a Fireball properly,” now stands in the Valley of the End, tearing through space and time with a single palm. He isn’t an Uchiha and has no Sharingan. He isn’t an Uzumaki, either, and has no sealed power within him. But he has a System, and it’s a critical-hit type! He transmigrated and immediately triggered [Training Critical Hit], getting a C-rank jutsu in seconds at the cost of coughing up blood for three days. The first time he used his self-created Water-Wind Release, he nearly blew himself up. During the Chunin Ninja Exams, he not only exposed Root’s dark dealings, but also turned the Akatsuki, made Sasuke cry, and got Naruto to call him “Big Bro”!