Li Yue, an ordinary young man from a modern city, was separated from his body in an accident. An irresistible force dragged him into a prehistoric world filled with roars and colossal shadows: the world of Monster Hunter. To his horror, he hadn’t been reborn as a human. Instead, he had taken over the body of a newly hatched, still-helpless juvenile Valstrax. Stranger still, the Valstrax had unmistakably female features. He had become “she”: Xinghui, a Valstrax girl with a human soul.
At first, Xinghui struggled painfully between human reason and the Valstrax’s violent instincts. She retained Li Yue’s memories and thoughts, but had to adapt to this steel body that spewed dragon energy, learn to control her flight with the dragon-energy vents at her wingtips, and feel the “dragon energy” surging through her, powerful enough to tear the sky apart. While fleeing a large predator, she accidentally fell into the Ancient Forest on the New World, where she met Ella, an elite hunter of the Fifth Fleet who was on an investigation mission and was known as the “Azure Star.”
No, when did Gu Long act like this? The author came out to speak.
Changes to a hundred, the writing is excellent, the description of women's clothing and female bodies is perfect, and the description of female abduction is zero. The heroine is a dragon lady who first travels through time and then transforms into a dragon. The second heroine is the strongest warrior of mankind. The two of them belong to a strong alliance. The battle scenes depict Laman, ancient dragons and humans, from enemies to initial trust. As long as there is a stronger enemy, the two originally hostile forces can shake hands and make peace. What's more, the heroine already has human memories. I am looking forward to the following plot more and more. Tsk tsk.
Well, the main poisonous point is the collapse of Canglan Star's combat power and the collapse of Tianhui. There is no big problem with the storyline.
The first few chapters are quite difficult, but the later chapters become more interesting and get better. Tianhui Longniang, it's interesting to think about it
Well, good, keep working hard, but some details need to be optimized. [Notice]
Your setting is very good. I wanted to give it five stars, but the Blue Star's strength has been excessively weakened, so I have to give it one point.
Didn't Xinghui fight with the male fire dragon at the beginning, and four hunters came to her lair to investigate? Why did she change it?
It's okay, but the biggest problem is that human thinking seems too indecisive and is close to the Virgin. As long as most people are not tortured and killed, they will not feel guilty about killing at all, and people are inherently violent, but anyone who reads more history will not think so ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ
The author has made a lot of secondary creations on the Monster Hunter worldview, and I approve of the plot. But for readers who simply want to see the plot of Monster Hunter, it may not be satisfying.
No, when did Gu Long act like this? The author came out to speak.
Changes to a hundred, the writing is excellent, the description of women's clothing and female bodies is perfect, and the description of female abduction is zero. The heroine is a dragon lady who first travels through time and then transforms into a dragon. The second heroine is the strongest warrior of mankind. The two of them belong to a strong alliance. The battle scenes depict Laman, ancient dragons and humans, from enemies to initial trust. As long as there is a stronger enemy, the two originally hostile forces can shake hands and make peace. What's more, the heroine already has human memories. I am looking forward to the following plot more and more. Tsk tsk.
Well, the main poisonous point is the collapse of Canglan Star's combat power and the collapse of Tianhui. There is no big problem with the storyline.
The first few chapters are quite difficult, but the later chapters become more interesting and get better. Tianhui Longniang, it's interesting to think about it
Well, good, keep working hard, but some details need to be optimized. [Notice]
Your setting is very good. I wanted to give it five stars, but the Blue Star's strength has been excessively weakened, so I have to give it one point.
Didn't Xinghui fight with the male fire dragon at the beginning, and four hunters came to her lair to investigate? Why did she change it?
It's okay, but the biggest problem is that human thinking seems too indecisive and is close to the Virgin. As long as most people are not tortured and killed, they will not feel guilty about killing at all, and people are inherently violent, but anyone who reads more history will not think so ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ
The author has made a lot of secondary creations on the Monster Hunter worldview, and I approve of the plot. But for readers who simply want to see the plot of Monster Hunter, it may not be satisfying.
Well written, keep up the good work, author