Li Yue, an ordinary young man from a modern city, was separated from his body in an accident. An irresistible force dragged him into a prehistoric world filled with roars and colossal shadows: the world of Monster Hunter. To his horror, he hadn’t been reborn as a human. Instead, he had taken over the body of a newly hatched, still-helpless juvenile Valstrax. Stranger still, the Valstrax had unmistakably female features. He had become “she”: Xinghui, a Valstrax girl with a human soul.
At first, Xinghui struggled painfully between human reason and the Valstrax’s violent instincts. She retained Li Yue’s memories and thoughts, but had to adapt to this steel body that spewed dragon energy, learn to control her flight with the dragon-energy vents at her wingtips, and feel the “dragon energy” surging through her, powerful enough to tear the sky apart. While fleeing a large predator, she accidentally fell into the Ancient Forest on the New World, where she met Ella, an elite hunter of the Fifth Fleet who was on an investigation mission and was known as the “Azure Star.”
No, when did Gu Long become this bad? The author should speak up!
The writing is superb, the descriptions of women in drag and their bodies are spot-on, and there's absolutely no depiction of female corruption. The female lead is a dragon girl who first transmigrates into the body of a dragon and then transforms into human form, while the second female lead is the strongest human warrior; the two form a powerful alliance.
Well, the main problem is that the combat power of Azure Star is inconsistent, and Tianhui's is slightly inconsistent. The main plot is fine.
The first few chapters were a bit difficult, but it gets more and more interesting as it goes on, gradually getting better and better. The Heavenly Wisdom Dragon Girl, just thinking about her is intriguing.
Hmm, not bad, keep it up! But some details need some optimization. [Note]
Your concept is excellent; I originally wanted to give it five stars, but the excessive weakening of Azure Star's strength warrants a deduction of one point.
Didn't the author initially have Xinghui fighting a Rathalos, and four hunters coming to her lair to investigate? Why was it changed?
It's alright, but the biggest problem is that human thinking seems too indecisive, bordering on saintly. Unless it's the massacre of the majority, there's absolutely no remorse for killing. Furthermore, humans are inherently prone to violence; anyone who has read more history wouldn't think this way. ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ
The author has done a lot of secondary creation on the Monster Hunter universe, and I approve of the plot. However, readers who simply want to see the Monster Hunter story might not be satisfied.
Well written, keep up the good work!