
Starting with the Creation of a Poker Organization
从创建扑克组织开始
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 546k Words
- Genre
- Mystery
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- Mystery High-Concept
- Updated
- 1mo ago
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- Fanqie
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Explore more →I've Been Using Tomato for Three Years, but Lately I Really Can't Get Into Any Books
I want books that really make me sit up and take notice!!!! Help me get over my reading slump, fellow readers!
High Martial Arts, Action-Packed, No Hidden Strength, 200,000+ Words, No Idiot Plots
A Masked Protagonist with Terrifying Strength Who Keeps a Low Profile, but Strikes Back the Moment He's Provoked
Doppelganger Stories Where the Clones Have Their Own Minds
I want to read something similar to All My Clones Are Here for Fun, He Believed It, He Really Believed It! (Let the Clone Fly for a While).
Mysteries, Potions, Sequences, Steampunk, Western Fantasy... Cthulhu!
Looking for books like God Game 1: Lord of the Mysteries, New Shanghai Tales. It feels like fantasy fiction fell off a cliff after the Squid. What's going on? Are there no good ones anymore? Has nobody written Lovecraftian fiction since the Squid? Please help me verify this!
The Protagonist Pretends to Be an Organization Early On, Then Makes Use of Their Secret Identities Later
, so this organization appears before the public, who think it's an organization rather than one person
Comics, Forums, Female-Focused, No CP, Popularity System
I want stories like *I Became a Popular Character After Entering a Comic*. Hehe, I want to read something like that, but I haven't found many that suit my taste.
Tomato Novel Has Had so Many Great New Releases Lately, but the Word Counts...
Lately, Tomato Books keeps recommending stories that update constantly, then after a while there's another new book with only a hundred-odd thousand words, but plenty of readers. They all seem pretty good, too, but just when you get really interested, the story ends…
Please Recommend High-Quality Supernatural Horror Stories
Supernatural Novels Where Ghosts Can't Be Killed and Can Only Be Fought with Other Ghosts
The Protagonist Founds an Organization and Builds It Up. A Slower Pace Is Fine
Any Books About Bai Liu from Global Examination, the 86?
Behind-the-Scenes Scheming, Summoning, and Building a Faction, with a Sane Protagonist
Male-Oriented Fiction with No Romance! No Romance! Don’t Recommend It Otherwise!
Don't suddenly give me a love interest halfway through and then claim there's no female lead. I hate random romance subplots 🙃
Card-Drawing Roleplay! Original Characters! An Original Organization! The Characters and Their Real Selves Being Adorable Together!
I'm looking for books like *Horror: I Built the Anomaly Containment Society*. Please stop recommending fanfiction, like Conan, Tomb Raiders, or Genshin Impact. Thanks.
I’m Tired of Saying the Words “No Female Lead”
The Protagonist Transmigrates, Builds a Power Base, Controls Everything from Behind the Scenes, and Is Unbeatable
The protagonist transmigrates, builds a faction, and controls everything from behind the scenes. Even when killing enemies, he attacks remotely without showing himself. Remember, he must be truly invincible and truly in control behind the scenes.
Looking for Novels Where the Protagonist Makes Up an Awesome Identity! I’m Out of Things to Read!
Looking for books like I Became a God After Pretending to Be a Noble. Are there stories where the protagonist transmigrates from the start with nothing, invents an impressive identity for themselves, then gradually fleshes it out until everyone believes it's real?
Novels with More Than 5,000 Chapters About Building a Faction
Novels Where People Call the Protagonist “Sir,” “Master,” or Something Unknowable
The protagonist is powerful, or seems powerful. Alternatively, they may seem weak, but everyone around them wildly overestimates them.
The Protagonist Creates an Organization Where Everyone Wears a Mask and Has a Codename
I want books similar to Behind the Scenes, I Am Extraordinary and Created the Dawn!
Any Stories Where the Male Lead Uses a Secret Identity and Gets Mistaken for a Powerful Organization?
I want a story where the male protagonist creates secret identities just to mess around everywhere. But because people read too much into everything, they think he belongs to some huge, incredible organization. No matter what he does, everyone assumes he’s amazing. No female lead! No female lead! No female lead! Ideally, no romance at all.
Draw Secret Identities and Play Roles, Form an Organization, and Have the Clones Develop a Twisted Possessiveness Toward the Original
The protagonist takes on secret identities, acts out roles, and establishes an organization. The avatars have a pathological possessiveness toward the main body.
True Masterpieces Only, Nothing Below 9.5. I've Read Exotic Beasts, Ten Days of Play, and Gods and Deities
Any stories with realistic, natural characterization, a tight pace, and an author who really cares? I’ve been a longtime Qidian reader.
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The writing is pretty bad, the writing is good, but the reason why I gave it four stars is because the author used to update more than 1,000 words a day when the traffic was at its best. At that time, I kept trying to persuade him to do more to retain people. The author didn't listen, and the traffic plummeted. But it's okay now, with two updates a day, 4,000 words [][]
Original text Seeing his silence, Wang Peng glanced at the mediocre car and the empty place behind him. The corner of his mouth curled up with a hint of contempt, and his voice was deliberately raised so that the guests around him could hear it: "What? Can't get it out? Or is there no invitation at all?" He took a step forward, with an aggressive momentum, "You want to sneak into the Zhou family's banquet in a broken car? Boy, you are not timid!" The author really doesn't know whether this kind of banquet stopped by nosy people to show off will be seen by more or less people? If you are writing for yourself and just writing casually, then forget about it. If you want to write a lot of plots for readers, you have to think about the readers' feelings [face covering] [face covering]
The theme of using poker as an organization is good, but some of the descriptions of family love are a bit too much, and the fact that girls are fawning over is not a good idea. , But it is also reasonable to hope that Duoduo will have organizational tasks or the protagonist's decisions, as well as looking for people's loyalty to the organization. I still hope there will be less family affection. It would be nice if they had a deeper misunderstanding and explained it away.
It's okay. You said this is your first book, so I'll give you a few suggestions. The biggest problem is that the character description is not obvious and the writing is very green. The people you summon all have the same character. They are unsmiling, respect their superiors, have a calm mind, have an online IQ, and are excellent employees. But it shouldn't be like this. People should be diverse. What kind of novel can capture people the most? I think there are only two words: contrast. The same goes for characterization. You can write about an old man who is romantic and popular every day after being summoned, a middle-aged man with a cold face and a dark belly, a royal sister who likes to listen to gossip, a submissive girl who usually fights like a perverted little loli, and disrespectful ones. The middle-aged boy who opens his mouth and shuts up, the middle-aged boy who is powerful but simple-minded and warm-hearted, the scarred face who always wants to cross the road with his grandmother, etc., I can think of countless of them. Different characters have different views on things, and they can jump out of the readers' thinking stereotypes, just like eating ice cream in the summer. The advantage of this is that if a character is injured, trapped or even killed in battle, readers will really care about it, instead of no one mentioning it again when the a cards are gone. Overall, your writing is pretty good, it's quite satisfactory, but it's just not popular. I'll forget about you when I see your updates and then look at other things. Come on.
Not bad, not bad, much better than others, at least the male protagonist will not work hard for human beings It's really getting worse and worse later on, and there's more and more nonsense.
I've read a few chapters and the writing is pretty good. I'll stick with it for now. I'll be an old fan later. Hehe. Good luck. Recommended. I hope the writing won't be bad in the future. The poker organization is cool. I have read about dozens of chapters and I personally like it very much. One reason is that I personally like things about poker factors. Another reason is that I think the plot of this book is okay. The content is compact and the writing is also very good. It is not so fantasy and the background stories of the characters are also emotional. The protagonist appears as the leader of the poker organization. He is very handsome and considerate of the employees (although it is called squeezing in a sense). The members provided by the system are also very good. The name is pretty good too [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][face covering] And I will continue this book later to see if it will be unfinished or something. For me, this book is haha. I think the score should be 8.0 To 8.5. Of course, everyone's preferences are different. This is just my opinion.
If it looks good, you can write more about it. There are characters transformed from playing cards, and there are also people from this world. Everyone has different characteristics and charms. If it looks good, you can write more about it. Can the author sleep after writing so little? More updates! ! !
I rarely post book reviews, but this one is really good. The description of the group portraits is very detailed and fascinating.
After reading a few chapters, you can roughly guess the general structure. Tomato creates an organization with a similar framework. Except for the content, there is no desire to read more. Although it is an organization, it is not a group portrait. The members of the organization are all fake people given by the system. The protagonist is like a butler hired by the system [laughs]. This kind of novel system is the protagonist, right? But I didn't stick to it until the end. Maybe there is a twist in this book? Does anyone recommend a group portrait article in which the members of the organization are real people? [I learned] It is best to have no system or the system is just a platform.
It's okay, but there are a lot of pretense and slap-in-the-face plots. Also, if possible, Liu Tianming and Su Qingxue hope to have a good ending. If it really doesn't work, I hope it can be written more reasonably and not leave any poisonous points.