I Want to Raise My Little Sister

Although Goldfinger is a bit big, I really like this story about bringing up a younger sister and establishing a children's group.

It was written like a joke, but it was quite enjoyable! Give me four points for encouragement haha ​​😃

The speech is clear and clear, the plot of the story is tight and reasonable, there is no sloppiness, and it is well written:

The composition is well written.

Those who cultivate immortality. Treat yourself like a soldier. Being afraid when seeing people makes it okay for an eight-year-old to be timid and fearful. But you are a cultivator

If you don't use so many verbose modifiers, your evaluation may be higher.

Very nice, five-star praise

The story is quite interesting and very interesting.

Very beautiful, very exciting

A very good book, thumbs up for the author! I hope to continue writing good books and satisfy readers' requirements!