A Crippled Spirit Root? I’ll Ascend with Formulas

It's very depressing to watch. The characters are not fleshed out enough and the narrative is not clear enough. Although the subject matter is very novel and the development of the story is okay, it can be seen that the author is probably a novice. If he writes for a while, his writing style will get better and better. Come on! Give you one more star

The writing is very good, the narrative logic is clear, and the story makes people unable to stop reading. It can be seen that the author worked hard to write and handled every detail. The only thing I regret is the protagonist's use of alchemy waste residue. Wouldn't it be better if he used the waste residue to extract useful substances to greatly improve his cultivation. The writing is very good, the fusion of science and fantasy is fresh and beautiful, but the story is a bit thin.

A refreshing stream of data flow cultivation, suitable for men with science majors [laughing][laughing][laughing] Come on

It's a bit interesting, but it's too professional and I'm afraid I won't understand it.

I generally don't comment. I think such books will have greater universal value in the future. They are the future form of real little hands, and that is of practical significance. I have read five or six such books. This one has "brain" and tension, regardless of the contradictions in the plot, the character structure, and the depiction of scientific chemistry.

A novel theme of cultivating immortality in the science department, unsystematic and logical, suitable for readers with patience [Blow Kiss]

This is all a big problem. The content is so hard-core and the logic is rigorous. It's worth watching.

It looks good, the inspiration is good, the rhythm is good, the logic is not too problematic, but it seems that there is some kind of AI to help write the article.

The author's book is very creative and more interesting than a pretentious and slap-in-the-face text. But why does the world of cultivation, which does not have the decadent Confucian culture, pay attention to morality?

It feels like a red article, very nice