The Hero Failed to Draw the Holy Sword

It's a rare two-protagonist plot, both written well. One is the son of prophecy but failed to pull out the holy sword and ran away from home to take risks; the other is a brave man who has taken the template of Joan of Arc and has justice in his heart but is growing up. I look forward to the two meeting each other. (By the way, why do the introduction and the title of the book only include the Arthur part? This may cause readers to find that it is different from what they imagined, and then be persuaded to leave. I hope it can be changed 😂)

It can be seen that the author wants to write a double line, but the introduction only introduces Arthur, so most people come in to see Arthur. This will make it uncomfortable [Thinking]

As of July 31st, evaluation of Chapter 8 of Volume 2. 1. Theme format: Japanese-style Western fantasy novel-dual protagonists 2. Content introduction: This book begins with the failure of the last crusade against the Demon King and the death of the brave man. A new prophecy gave birth to a new hero, but this carefully cultivated hero was not recognized by the Holy Sword. Instead, the onlookers who rushed into the ceremony pulled out the Holy Sword in order to protect their family from punishment (actually, the reason for pulling out the Holy Sword was quite funny). The story of this book unfolds from this point, and revolves around two protagonists, a brave man who has not drawn the holy sword and a new brave man who has drawn the holy sword to protect his family. The subject matter is novel and the content is not cliché. 3. Brief comment on the writing style: Among the authors of Tomato, the sentences are smooth and logical, and they can get passing marks. The overall story is not impetuous, not brainless, not Long Aotian, nor plain as water, nor does it deliberately show off the writing style and use gorgeous rhetoric. It's not a fun article, nor is it a sad article (a slight setback). It has just been started. I will add additional comments when there is new content in the future.

The Arthur line is good, but to be honest, I basically won't watch Jeanne. Coming here is more for Arthur.

Interestingly, Jeanne is the protagonist of the classic royal RPG, but as a reader, I was attracted by the title of the book, and what attracted me even more was the male protagonist's mental journey (the failure of the Holy Sword to be selected negated the belief/motivation of the male protagonist for more than ten years, and what the male protagonist will do and what kind of person he becomes is what attracts readers). So, promise me, will you give the male protagonist more plot? Volume 2 Chapter 18 and 19 Arthur is annoying The author's idea is good. Several of Arthur's recent pictures introduce the power of the demons, but this is quite boring.

Nice! I just finished reading it and updated it to chapter 37. At the beginning, the setting gave me a feeling similar to that of Simmel, who did not draw the holy sword but completed the heroic act. After reading it and thinking about it, since there are two protagonists (Arthur and Jean), it feels a bit like the iron broken teeth for Inuyasha and the natural teeth for Sesshomaru. The obvious difference between Arthur and Jean is that one is powerful but confused, and the other is determined but has no strength. What's a bit uncomfortable to watch is that it gets stuck at a critical point when switching perspectives (from Arthur to Jean). The description of the battle is too detailed (this is a matter of opinion, whether some battle descriptions can be more condensed) My personal suggestion is to finish writing a complete paragraph before switching. And it's also based on me personally, I prefer to see Arthur's perspective. Above It's rare that I have the motivation to read a book and feel in the mood to post a review. After reading the update, it was a bit rushed to be with Vivian and then die. The little girl Lily didn't handle the knife well here. Human emotions are complicated. If you are not decadent, you will become a wooden person by doing nothing. It is normal to feel confused, but how to deal with it so that the character can truly have a soul needs to be thought about carefully. For example, Guo Jing in The Legend of the Condor Heroes had a plot when he was growing up. He was confused about the meaning of practicing martial arts, and came up with the idea that everyone could avoid killing by not practicing martial arts. Later, he was dispelled by Hong Qigong, and his ideological realm was sublimated and he became a true chivalrous man. The author may be confused during this period, so he can refer to many classic techniques. Anyway, keep up the good work💪 I'm just a reader, and the reference I can give is limited. It's not always the case that a good work will hit a bottleneck.

[I just saw the hero leading Vivian to break out, and the hero killed the governor] Two main lines run in parallel, the hero's own adventure and the change and progress of the female hero Jeanne. Both main lines are quite interesting. But now in this paragraph of text, too many descriptors give me a feeling that it is difficult to swallow. A bunch of unnecessary descriptors are piled into a paragraph. If you can change this situation where a paragraph is stacked with unnecessary descriptors, it will feel much better when you read it. Of course, this may also be my own feeling, a matter of personal taste [Stack a Armor] So give it a four-star review

Continuing with what I just said (Chapter 2 of the second chapter), as a brave man, she fought against the evil forces and saved others. It is understandable that she did this. However, the subsequent plot and the counterattack against the powerful enemy did not give me a very good sense. If it were not for the holy sword, her behavior would only lead herself into the abyss of death. Without thinking about other factors, if the brave men in other works did not have such a strong backing, she would not even be able to get out of the first city. , I can also see her efforts in the author's description, but in just this little time, she was able to grow quickly and rival (the wording is a bit unclear, let's say confrontation.) Strong men who are several levels higher than him, most things in this world cannot be compensated by hard work. . . . . That's all I want to say for now. I feel pretty good about the male protagonist's line in this novel, but the heroine's sexual handling is a little bad. The above is just my personal opinion. If other readers or authors have any different opinions, you can put them forward. Please discuss rationally and don't curse. If you really want to curse, please don't affect my family. Maybe my understanding of the female protagonist is so lacking, mainly because the early stage processing was very good, so I didn't read the subsequent female protagonist very carefully. If you have any other details, please let me know. . Overall, the author Dada wrote a pretty good book. I hope you can support it and I gave you a small gift.

It's very well written, there's not much to say, and it's very informative. For me as a "reader" It's hard to wait for one protagonist to finish before watching another, but I just prefer to watch Arthur's main plot. (Changing the protagonist back and forth is actually not a good experience for most readers) I think I can try writing two books, but it would be best if the timelines can be synchronized. (It feels convenient to write them separately) This also increases the freedom of readers to choose what to look at. At the beginning, the real "protagonist" will default to the male protagonist, which is difficult to change. For situations like two protagonists in one shot, you can use ""male protagonist, female protagonist + title"" to publish it in two books. (I can't think of anything else, just a comment)

Can there be more lines about Arthur? Isn't it a male channel? Why am I looking at women?