The Five Ghost Tree Clan

Yes, I can sense that you want to write about true cultivation. However, the title is "Five Ghosts Family," so shouldn't the protagonist have more descendants? There are too few. Also, the protagonist initially seems cunning and scheming, but later he seems like a different person. You used too many emotional words, making it feel a bit bloated, and the logic is also a bit messy.

I've only read up to chapter 20. The Five Ghost Families are all dead. Does this mean the protagonist has to be reborn?

Keep it up! Hopefully, this is getting exciting! Let's build up the family and stop torturing the main character so much on Tomato! The hardships encountered by mortals cultivating immortality are an advantage. We're tired of stories with characters who are overpowered and have cheat codes. Too many trials and tribulations would diminish the thrill and make other readers dislike it.

This is a very good book; the three golden chapters are very well written. But I'd like to say something else. Some people say they're unhappy with reality and want to read some light novels, which might make them feel uncomfortable. But this has nothing to do with reality.

Can you feel that way? In the future, when this book reaches 500 chapters, and you're finally looking for something to read, you'll definitely feel like you've finally found a gem! But right now, with only 65 chapters, it's way too early for me! Only 65 chapters?! Not nearly enough! When will I be able to read it all? Then I'll be able to greedily devour this book and be completely satisfied!

I think it's alright, but there's really no need to play these kinds of tricks in a village. Also, writing a story that tortures the protagonist on Tomato, buddy, you're pretty ruthless!

The setting and world-building are very novel, the cultivation system is different, and the cultivation families are written differently from the usual cultivation family stories. This aspect deserves five stars. The content is a bit angsty, and somewhat deliberately so. The plot itself is fine, but some parts aren't clearly explained; these might be clues or foreshadowing left by the author.

The author was recommended online, so I'm going to share this one – it's great and I love reading it!

How about we consider changing our surname to "Five Ghosts" after establishing the family? It sounds pretty good.

The writing is delicate, and the details are impeccable. However, I felt like I skipped some details while reading, perhaps because I was reading too fast and didn't fully understand them. The current rating is too low; it should be around 9.0. Keep up the good work, author! 🤔