Azur Lane: Miss Dushima's Little Tricks

So far so good. It would be even better if the author could come up with a reversal, such as a series of stories after dating other heroines, or perhaps dating Busujima for less than a month, and the two were not suitable. Later, the protagonist met a girlfriend who suited him, and the author could add a new one. The heroine is a female protagonist, and the male protagonist is also a college student. She can't be stupid, but needs to be able to think about the future and make judgments. After all, you won't be able to write much if you only write about dating on a poisonous island. It would also be interesting to have a plot twist [laughing] Come on, author👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

It's good-looking, and the protagonist is quite gregarious and has his own laughs. This is what a young boy should be like. It's much better than those movies that give the protagonist cheats and don't eat anything, and abuse everyone without having any laughs of his own. Then I like the emotional line better. Emotions must be cultivated slowly. It is more than a little better than those who are taught and trained at the beginning. And I hope it will be a single heroine. After all, it is very unconventional to have a harem in the blue world.

In addition to looking weird at the beginning, it gets better and better later on. If you like Poison Island, this is a better book, and find a book about the island. If it is not easy to start, you can suggest listening to the book. Later, the author started to revise, and it became more comfortable to watch. It is just too little, but there is no way. I think this reminder is like the number of people, ugh

Okay, Okinawa is over, and my sister is about to appear. There is a lot to write about in the following plot. The Xiabi Impact Experiment Kit will be used on the male protagonist, and the male protagonist will be hypnotized to control Busujima-sama, [laughs]

It's so good. I've been looking for someone to write about Poison Island. I highly recommend it. Come on, author. It looks great. Can the author update it 10 times a day? [Crying] [Crying]

Alas, I have seen that the author has written really good, and very few, articles about islands, but I suddenly thought of Aina and Kohei being together in the original work. I feel a little uncomfortable. I wonder if the author can save it. I feel that they should not be together in the first place, and should be with Kitahara.

I hope the author can change [] to " ", otherwise I always feel that the language lacks a sense of power.

It's good, but I'm not used to the first person pronoun.

It's very well written. I feel like the relationship and interaction between Busujima-sama and the protagonist is a bit awkward, but the rest is fine.

It's still very good, and the character designs are quite restored. What I like better is that the relationship between Kohei and Aina is advanced. One thing that personally bothers me is that some characters are only called by their last names. For example, Iori is always called Kitahara in the article, but it doesn't have much impact on the book.