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BE. . ? It's very sad. Although there are some flaws in the front and the daily life is a bit boring, the despair of the protagonist is unacceptable. It is an excellent but slightly lacking work. The author is great, please come on 💕

Although the author has not updated the ending, but judging from the current writing style and plot appearance, the writing style is very good. This subject matter is not very common. To be honest, I was really deceived by the author at the beginning. But later on, it turned out to be like this. It is really good-looking. Although there are very few people watching it, it is very good-looking. Although occasionally there are some doubts, that is, the protagonist really will not starve to death, eating like this, But the problem is not big. Overall, I think it is very interesting, and there are no big surprises. Although it is mostly daily life, the plot also has its ups and downs, and there will even be some twists and turns later, so overall it will not make people feel boring. It is not the kind of daily writing written by Shimizu, so it is still very interesting. I hope the author will continue to update it!

It's great. I strongly recommend you to buy a share. The author's writing style is far beyond his actual age. Anyway, I couldn't write it at the same time 😳 I really like the character of Xia Youhua. It's very tense and the broken parts at the back are also delicious 😳😳 Recommended [Blow kiss] Leng Yueye, bad woman, stop worrying about the painting, I feel sorry for the heroine 😢 😢

It's good to read, but it feels unfinished. The protagonist's cheerful and lively personality alleviates a lot of depression in the depressing atmosphere, but it makes it even more sadistic. The heroine seems a bit CS (of course, without her assistant, which is outrageous, this assistant gives people a feeling of the uncanny valley, although it is not a robot). Is her love twisted? I personally think that how can a person dare to say he loves others if he can do such cs things? In the article, the story of the previous generation was not discussed in detail, and the protagonist's father was only mentioned to make money and run away. I think this is a very important thing and should be discussed in detail. Summary: You won't lose money if you invest in shares. It's rare to find this kind of article in Tomato.

It's refreshing, wonderful, wonderful, very beautiful. The writing and plot are very good. The whole book has a slight sense of depression, which contrasts with the protagonist's active mentality. The reality is not as good as it is, and the game is not happy either. With a mother who depends on each other, a smart and lovely sister, and a girl with three months to live, when I took out the four thousand yuan, what I felt was relief, but I felt sorry for Xia Ke, and could no longer wait for her sister to "wake up".

I'm really tired, under the pressure of work, watching my brother sitting on the hospital bed, smiling at me, but it's hard to hide the sadness in his eyes, watching my mother lying on the hospital bed looking out the window mechanically, my heart feels like needle pricks? "Tingling"…. I was like a suction stone, absorbing the negative emotions of people around me and converting them into never-ending sadness and loneliness. I must have gone crazy. Probably from the moment I picked up the knife, the familiar game interface was my only comfort, but I didn't dare to have too many extravagant hopes...

The usual five stars, the writing is good, there are many details, there is no knife as I imagined, and I only felt the sense of depression in the second half. My feeling is that I am aggrieved, aggrieved for the heroine. I think the death of the heroine after returning to the wild is a kind of relief. The psychological description of the second heroine is a bit lacking, and her behavioral changes often require the reader to guess the motivation. It's unclear what kind of conflict there is between the second female lead and the heroine's father. I only see that the heroine is either being abused or on the way to being abused. The girls in the game are also missing. It's a pity, but it's very good for a junior high school student to write something like this. I can look forward to the future.

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Simply put, it is a good book for certain people. It is very difficult for the author, as a high school student, to write such an article. As far as I am concerned, I am very fond of this. The desperate but optimistic thoughts in the early summer are very suitable for me and can be easily brought in. The feeling of gradual fragmentation in the late summer is also great, allowing me to feel the despair and loneliness of having no more care in the world. Of course, there are disadvantages, but they are acceptable. The main thing is that there is too little sugar. Maybe it can be said that there is no sugar at all? In my opinion, Xia Zhi never had a good impression of Leng from beginning to end (at least not in terms of love). Of course, this can also be said to be the author's characteristic, which is different from ordinary wife-chasing crematoriums. The ending of this story was already determined from the beginning. In addition, the emotional foreshadowing is a bit inexplicable (mainly because of why Leng has a crush on Xia), or the author downplays the reason for Leng's revenge (but it's not that he didn't write it, but he wrote it very directly). The story between the heroines' fathers can be told in a little depth. It doesn't need to be too much, but it can be included. I'm not very able to explain things clearly with just a few cold words. All in all, it is a good book, worth recommending and worth watching. (Ps: The author is really great at writing like this, come on!)

Only love can make people grow flesh and blood crazily, and everything born based on hatred will only return to nothingness in the end. Ever since Leng Yueye used hatred to hurt Xia Youhua and controlled her by his side, she was destined to be unworthy of Youhua's affection and love. After reading the whole story, I really felt sorry for Xia Youhua. Why should such a good girl meet a pervert? 🥺 The whole novel is completely about a perverted Leng Yueye using hatred, paranoid love and possessiveness to destroy, torture, and inhumanely destroy all the dignity and soul of an originally optimistic and positive lovely girl. It's too hopeless, too painful for both Xia Youhua and the readers. I always have the idea that the ending and process should not be so regretful and painful. I always feel that the author is missing a lot. I'm really, really sorry, I'm almost depressed when I see it 😢 I hope the author can give you a better ending and give her more love 🥺