Did I Get the Wrong Terminal Illness Script?

BE. . ? It's very sad. Although there are some flaws in the front and the daily life is a bit boring, the despair of the protagonist is unacceptable. It is an excellent but slightly lacking work. The author is great, please come on [Sending Hearts]

Although the author has not updated the ending, but judging from the current writing style and plot appearance, the writing style is very good. This subject matter is not very common. To be honest, I was really deceived by the author at the beginning. But later on, it turned out to be like this. It is really good-looking. Although there are very few people watching it, it is very good-looking. Although occasionally there are some doubts, that is, the protagonist really will not starve to death, eating like this, But the problem is not big. Overall, I think it is very interesting, and there are no big surprises. Although it is mostly daily life, the plot also has its ups and downs, and there will even be some twists and turns later, so overall it will not make people feel boring. It is not the kind of daily writing written by Shimizu, so it is still very interesting. I hope the author will continue to update it!

It's great. I strongly recommend you to buy a share. The author's writing style is far beyond his actual age. Anyway, I couldn't write it at the same time [Shy] I really like the character of Xia Youhua. It's very tense and the broken parts at the back are also delicious [Shy][Shy] Recommended [Blow kiss] Leng Yueye, bad woman, stop worrying about the painting, I feel sorry for the heroine [crying] [crying]

It's good to read, but it feels unfinished. The protagonist's cheerful and lively personality alleviates a lot of depression in the depressing atmosphere, but it makes it even more sadistic. The heroine seems a bit CS (of course, without her assistant, which is outrageous, this assistant gives people a feeling of the uncanny valley, although it is not a robot). Is her love twisted? I personally think that how can a person dare to say he loves others if he can do such cs things? In the article, the story of the previous generation was not discussed in detail, and the protagonist's father was only mentioned to make money and run away. I think this is a very important thing and should be discussed in detail. Summary: You won't lose money if you invest in shares. It's rare to find this kind of article in Tomato.

It's refreshing, wonderful, wonderful, very beautiful. The writing and plot are very good. The whole book has a slight sense of depression, which contrasts with the protagonist's active mentality. The reality is not as good as it is, and the game is not happy either. With a mother who depends on each other, a smart and lovely sister, and a girl with three months to live, when I took out the four thousand yuan, what I felt was relief, but I felt sorry for Xia Ke, and could no longer wait for her sister to "wake up".

I'm really tired, under the pressure of work, watching my brother sitting on the hospital bed, smiling at me, but it's hard to hide the sadness in his eyes, watching my mother lying on the hospital bed looking out the window mechanically, my heart feels like needle pricks? "Tingling"…. I was like a suction stone, absorbing the negative emotions of people around me and converting them into never-ending sadness and loneliness. I must have gone crazy. Probably from the moment I picked up the knife, the familiar game interface was my only comfort, but I didn't dare to have too many extravagant hopes...

The usual five stars, the writing is good, there are many details, there is no knife as I imagined, and I only felt the sense of depression in the second half. My feeling is that I am aggrieved, aggrieved for the heroine. I think the death of the heroine after returning to the wild is a kind of relief. The psychological description of the second heroine is a bit lacking, and her behavioral changes often require the reader to guess the motivation. It's unclear what kind of conflict there is between the second female lead and the heroine's father. I only see that the heroine is either being abused or on the way to being abused. The girls in the game are also missing. It's a pity, but it's very good for a junior high school student to write something like this. I can look forward to the future.

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Simply put, it is a good book for certain people. It is very difficult for the author, as a high school student, to write such an article. As far as I am concerned, I am very fond of this. The desperate but optimistic thoughts in the early summer are very suitable for me and can be easily brought in. The feeling of gradual fragmentation in the late summer is also great, allowing me to feel the despair and loneliness of having no more care in the world. Of course, there are disadvantages, but they are acceptable. The main thing is that there is too little sugar. Maybe it can be said that there is no sugar at all? In my opinion, Xia Zhi never had a good impression of Leng from beginning to end (at least not in terms of love). Of course, this can also be said to be the author's characteristic, which is different from ordinary wife-chasing crematoriums. The ending of this story was already determined from the beginning. In addition, the emotional foreshadowing is a bit inexplicable (mainly because of why Leng has a crush on Xia), or the author downplays the reason for Leng's revenge (but it's not that he didn't write it, but he wrote it very directly). The story between the heroines' fathers can be told in a little depth. It doesn't need to be too much, but it can be included. I'm not very able to explain things clearly with just a few cold words. All in all, it is a good book, worth recommending and worth watching. (Ps: The author is really great at writing like this, come on!)

Who could be such a good person and make Don't Want to Be Famous more than 70 chapters long?

Only love can make people grow flesh and blood crazily, and everything born based on hatred will only return to nothingness in the end. Ever since Leng Yueye used hatred to hurt Xia Youhua and controlled her by his side, she was destined to be unworthy of Youhua's affection and love. After reading the whole story, I really felt sorry for Xia Youhua. Why should such a good girl meet a pervert? [Almost crying] The whole novel is completely about a perverted Leng Yueye using hatred, paranoid love and possessiveness to destroy, torture, and inhumanely destroy all the dignity and soul of an originally optimistic and positive lovely girl. It's too hopeless, too painful for both Xia Youhua and the readers. I always have the idea that the ending and process should not be so regretful and painful. I always feel that the author is missing a lot. I'm really, really sorry, I'm almost depressed when I see it [crying] I hope the author can give you a better ending and give her more love [I'm about to cry]

Well written, keep up the good work. There are just a few people.

After reading the whole article, I can only say that the author's writing style is superb, and some parts are like appreciating a famous novel. The content is novel. It is rare to see such detailed daily writing. I personally think it is not boring. Xia's "death" was taken for granted in one thing. Without the cliché of chasing his wife in the crematorium, this ending was the best. Not much words are used to describe Xia Zai's psychological aftermath, but her despair can still be felt until her final consciousness completely collapses and she is relieved. It was so bitter. At the same time, for Leng, her family was ruined by her enemy. Finding her enemy's daughter for revenge was her obsession and it was natural for her. However, her mistake was that she must not fall in love with her, but because she was too paranoid, the relationship came to a bad ending. Overall, the author's writing is really good. My very tricky taste has been well controlled by the author. It can be said that this is an article that I like very much. It is so beautiful and wonderful. Can you continue writing without delaying your studies? I look forward to the next one and support [Blow Kiss]

A well-written work, with extremely detailed descriptions of various scenes, but the plot is really a bit of a stream of consciousness. Many key plot points are not explained clearly, which makes the reading a bit confusing, including why Leng Yueye clearly said that he fell in love with the protagonist but still did a lot of inexplicable abuse of the protagonist, what happened between the two parents, and a series of other important parts are not explained, but it is still a good book worth recommending.

As a sadistic novel, it is indeed very good. In addition, the heroine has seen everything away and is in a state of being destroyed if she can't escape. There is a great contrast with those sadistic novels that keep running away and then being caught repeatedly. Don't say whether it is sweet or not, just say whether it is sadistic or not.

I really doubt whether the author has personally experienced something similar. The ending is so well written that I actually like to read this kind of story. Maybe I am the same type of person. I can feel the author's mood when he wrote it. I still want to thank the author for allowing me to read this story. I will look forward to your next work.

The author's young work is quite good, but I don't like Yue so I deducted one star. The author's portrayal is very good. Yue didn't change much before his death. After his death, he finally felt confused and maybe regretful, but it didn't matter. Until the author graduates in two years and has time and ideas, he is currently the seventh on the birth list in the BE novels I have read.

It's a good sadistic story, but the heroine's mentality is too good. I hope it can be more sadistic [thinking][laughing]

It's beautiful, but the author didn't do it lightly or too seriously. Feeling like my heart is stuffy

The writing is very good and very beautiful.

Why no extras!

It's really beautiful, but if you watch it too much, you'll easily get depressed [smile]

It's so beautiful, why are there so few people [crying]

How should I put it? I felt a tightness in my chest after reading it.

I like your abuse very much [laughs], be is a smooth landing, wallpaper love is human nature, but if you were he, there would be a Maserati [laughs]

It's very good. The inner drama of the protagonist is really good, but the pace is a bit fast.

It's beautiful, it makes my heart hurt to watch it [crying]

It's pretty good, but it makes me feel a little bad, so is this a he or a be [smile] After watching it for so long, I really don't like Leng at all. I don't know how to wash it now.

Zhenzhiyu, it's so suitable for my taste

Sure enough, it's still the standard ending.