In Tokyo Ghoul, I Fused with a Symbiote from the Start

Who on earth would read this kind of thing? I can't suffer the loss alone [angry] [angry], but I can be forgiven casually as long as I'm a woman? People have tested you in various ways, but you just forgive them casually? Can't stop being moved? Can't swallow a woman? Is it okay to attack you casually because you are a woman? What on earth are you thinking about watching this kind of thing?

Well, let me talk about my current feelings first. This book has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the subject matter is novel, and the setting of the massacre is consistent with the original work. The content about the massacre gives people a harmonious feeling. In short, it is easy to attract readers. The disadvantages are also obvious. The choice to add symbiotes in "Tokyo Ghoul" destined this book to be a cool novel. However, I can't see many cool elements in the author's writing, which gives people a sense of conflict. Secondly, I can see that The author seems to have written too hastily and has not laid out a good outline. It is easy to be misunderstood in many places. Although it is explained later, the majority of people in this software are discerning and impatient. It is difficult for such people to have the patience to continue reading. There are also logical problems and OOC phenomena in some content. For example, when Kaneki and the protagonist meet for the first time, the image of Kaneki will only say sorry after the misunderstanding. The author also seems not to understand the original content very well; In short, this book can only be ranked in the mid-to-medium range among the ghoul novels I have read. Logically speaking, I can only give it 3 stars. But among new authors, the writing style can be rated as above-average in the 4-star range. It is estimated that after the new book period, the rating will be between 7.5 And 8.6. My suggestion: The author should not have too high expectations for this book. You can use this book as an experience. Use this book to accumulate the small number of fans who are patient and not overly discerning as I mentioned earlier. Correct these shortcomings in the next book. In this way, the next book will have a high chance of becoming famous or getting a rating of 9.0 Or above.

Good review! Although I don't know why the score is so low, it may be because of the split of the official version, but it is really powerful and powerful, and can make up for many regrets in the original work. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Five stars to support the author Alas, I recommend you to stock up on what you want to read, because although this author has come back to update, I don't know which day he will suddenly stop updating. The last time I stopped updating, I stopped updating for half a year. What a pity for an author. Withdraw a five-star review.

The carnage is well written, but there are some problems with the description of the protagonist. He feels separated, and the left and right brains are fighting each other. But I have to say that the symbiote is well written.

It's very innovative, but not as good-looking as expected. It just feels very..."Pressing"

The style of this novel is concise, the narrative rhythm is compact and neat, and there is no sense of redundancy. Its core creativity is quite ingenious, breaking out of the common narrative framework and showing its distinct uniqueness. The author uses extremely concise writing to promote the plot. Although there is not much ink in the characterization, the characters are sharp and angular. "The changes from the beginning to the present", the action logic is clear and powerful, avoiding the procrastination and side branches that are easy to appear in most works, so that the story always maintains a strong propulsive force. It is hearty and attractive to read.

I can only say that it is really very interesting. The character of the protagonist has also changed a lot. He has become strong and confident. I can only say that the author is still very persuasive [shy]. Keep writing. The results of this book should not be bad. Come on, come on, come on.

It's currently in the top three ghoul stories I've read, and it's expected to be even higher. According to the new author, it's really good, but the love line is a bit flawed (the author himself said the love line is weird), but after all, the plot has just begun. Let's see how it develops later.

It's a ghoul fanfic. The content is very good. I feel nostalgic when I read it. The main character has a good social life and I like it very much. But it feels so well-rounded that there are no weak spots. If it is so strong in the early stage, it will feel like there are no opponents in the later stage. It is recommended that other characters can be strengthened in the later stage. But overall it is still very good, I like it very much, I hope the author can stick to it, and I will keep following it.

Not bad, not bad, really good-looking. In the early stage, the protagonist has not fully awakened to the consciousness of killing, so he is a bit too cautious, but later on, he will not have this problem. Carnage's dialogue is also just right, and the display of strength is also based on the normal principle of not attacking anyone unless they offend me, and if someone offends me, I will repay you twice as much. The battle scenes are also well described, but so far, Carnage's true strength has not been shown, and they are all quite weak. I feel that the instantaneous explosiveness and power of the massacre can be made more exaggerated. I feel like the emotional line could also be written better.