Tokyo: Building an Entertainment Empire, Starting as a Manga Artist

The writing is quite good, but the transitions are quite long. Although it highlights the characters in this way, it may not be a good solution for fast food novels. It is best to promote more books, because comics are actually very popular and difficult to write. Departing from the main line, I came here for the comic empire. There are a lot of things before the eighty chapter, and there are a lot of things after the eighty. I can only say that if it is more daily, you can not use the comic as the front, if there is a comic plot in ten chapters

It's good to skip the beginning and start on the career path to contact editors. However, there are so many descriptions of the personalities and appearances of landlords, convenience store managers, and clerks that I can't bear to read them. After all, I came here based on the title, so I thought it would be better to describe it in a few sentences, unless those people provided inspiration for the comic. However, this is a copy of the book, so it probably won't be used. It can be combined with it when he wants to draw his own original work and be interviewed. Also, can we not have a female protagonist? The main career route is more beautiful and less chaotic?

Having studied in Japan, the author's writing is very real and not even abrupt. The sense of immersion is very strong, and the characters are all flesh and blood. I feel that the author has carefully thought about the choice of words and sentences, and the rhythm of each chapter is also very good. It is a pity that the update is over. Hurry up. Don't force me to kneel down and beg you.

It's quite nice and has a good idea, suitable for those who like the light breeze. One star is deducted because there are too many traces of AI polishing in some places. Your own writing is good. I hope you don't rely on AI anymore. No matter how perfect the machine is, it can't compare to the appeal of a real person.

The book is bold and innovative, delaying the first drawing of comics. The first few chapters are used to highlight the character of the protagonist. From the helplessness and panic in the first few chapters when arriving in Japan, to the subsequent confrontation with the parent-teacher conference, there is an obvious growth line, and here you can create your own team.

It can be seen that the content is carefully written, and the details and character descriptions are very detailed. It can be seen that it has been deleted, deleted, rewritten and rewritten. It is not an ordinary running account. It is worth reading. I hope it will not be unfinished. The main character time travels because of his parents' affairs. This hole will be filled in at the end. Come on💪.

This is the most enjoyable book I have read in Japanese. There is no dragging plot so far. It would be nice if there were more words. It is not enough to read. I hope the author can maintain this level 😳😳

I've seen Chapter 17 and it's okay so far, but I have a paradox question. When the protagonist comes to Japan, will he meet himself as a chaebol? What is the purpose of the system treating the protagonist as Japanese?

The opening chapter, about a man alone and helplessly surviving in a foreign country, is quite realistic.

I like this. The protagonist is alone in Tokyo, climbing up step by step. Especially when he gets the first pot of gold, this process is the most exciting.