When the Pear Blossoms Bloom

The writing style is very good, and the conception is also sad. This type of novel is the same as mine. Few people like it, but the significance of its existence cannot be denied. When the text is formed, it becomes a world. Sometimes the ending is just to give the people in the book a complete destiny. You prefer literary works. Online writing is a bit difficult. Keep writing, keep the good ideas, plot design, and original intentions, and polish this novel, which is valuable. The following is an optimization of the opening chapter based on my understanding. If you like it, I will be very happy. If you don't like it, just communicate and make progress together. The text is as follows, please take a look... At the end of the spring of the seventeenth year of God's Blessing, a severe drought not seen in a century gnawed at Jinjiang Mansion in the northwest of the capital, and even the wind was filled with the smell of scorched earth. On the fourth day of September, autumn has entered, but the heat has not subsided and the drought has become more severe. As far as the eye can see, there is only red land for thousands of miles. On the ancient road in the east of the city, the morning light ripped through the thick ink-like night, but there was no warmth at all. The streets were dusty and dusty. Occasionally, pedestrians hurried past with hunched shoulders. The soles of their shoes ran over the cracked soil, and the sound of crunching floated in the air. Beside the corner door of the back garden of Jiang Mansion, a woman in plain clothes walked quickly. She was in her teens, her clothes were washed white with starch, but her back was straight. Her black hair was tied behind her head with an old silver hairpin. The hair on her temples was wet with sweat, sticking to her lightly red cheeks, dripping down Ruohong's cheeks and into her neck. She didn't bother to wipe the sweat, and clenched her white fingertips tightly. As soon as she reached the door, the door opened with a creak. A little girl with eyebrows and bangs poked out from the crack in the door. Her eyes were red and swollen. Before the woman could speak, he reached out and grabbed her sleeves and pulled her into the door. Her voice was choked and trembling: "Auntie, don't talk... Come with me quickly. If it's too late, I'm afraid I won't see you." The woman's breath tightened suddenly, tears condensed in her eyes, and her pace quickened. Walking around a few bushes of flowers and trees that were so dry that only their branches were left, I saw a dilapidated house standing in the morning light from a distance. The window paper was reduced to fragments, the corners of the eaves were covered with cobwebs, and even the door panels were cracked with deep cracks, lying alone in the grass. As she got closer, the maid Ju Xiang's heart-wrenching cry reached her ears: "Madam, I beg you, please use more force!" The woman stepped forward and knocked on the door, but she pushed lightly in front of the door. In front of her eyes, the wooden basin tipped over, leaving blood on the woman. At the feet, Ju Xiang knelt and sat beside the bed. The woman on the bed was dying, her hair was wet and stuck to her forehead, her mouth was slightly open and closed, the skin of her mouth was torn to the point of seeing the pink flesh, and the ravines were like the river ditches that had been dry for a long time. The only candlestick beside the bed was burning with light, dimly swaying, and only the bottom was still holding on, just like the life of the woman on the bed. The article is like flowers and rain, the wheels are rolling, the pear blossoms are all over the sky, the plainness reveals the elegant emotion, the romance of the storybook, the story is beautiful. But sometimes, it takes a little bit of extreme suffering to make love more real. Why does the concept of heart always have to make them hurt before it feels good? I don't have enough time to worry about not being included in the book review, so I'll come back and add one while the story is still rippling in my heart, and I can still catch the wave.

After reading this book, it reminded me of a beautiful encounter that happened in the south of Caiyun. The novel made me immersed in the story, and my heart seemed to be fluctuating along with the series of plot changes of the male and female protagonists. It's very exciting, everyone is welcome to enjoy and exchange.

When a mighty and domineering general meets a gentle and virtuous little woman, I began to think that this family conflict is the key point. However, the author's writing in large letters does have a special interest and is worth reading carefully. I started reading it again without realizing it. It's a wonderful story.

What I like most is the description of love in the book, which is wonderful and vivid.

Although I didn't read some of the later parts, I was very moved by the warmth in the front. The heroine is very lucky to have a good aunt and a good stepmother. This is very rare. After all, in most articles, these two characters are synonymous with evil [laughing], so it is still worth reading.

General, I'm going to prepare now! The language expression of the novel is very precise, the plot of the story is cleverly arranged, and the design of various hooks is very reasonable. It is a long-lasting read and is recommended for everyone to enjoy carefully.

After reading it, even though I am a newbie, the writing is considered very good among newcomers. The framework is pretty good, and the character plot descriptions and scenery descriptions are very vivid. Although it is a little dull at the beginning, as you read, you will find that the writing gets better and better, and the writing style has improved visibly. Moreover, ancient Chinese language itself requires a certain cultural background, and you must consult a lot of information. As a newcomer, it is really good. Although the heroine's mother died at the beginning of this book, and her scumbag father is also unreliable, she was very lucky to meet a very good aunt and stepmother, so that the two siblings who lost their mother when they were young have grown up very well. Speaking of which, the heroine's father is really lucky. His two wives are very good, and his children are well-educated. He is a real winner in life. In the whole story, there are still more good people. Although there are some scumbags, there are no big waves. The ending is also very happy. It is a little rushed later, but this ending can be considered a perfect ending! Come on, come on, I believe you will get better and better! ! !

My first impression after reading this book is that it is like "A Dream of Red Mansions". The author's writing style is very good. This kind of expression is rare in modern novels. This book has a strong sense of imagery, from the scenery, environment, to characters. The story is a bit like, Do you know whether you should be green, fat, red, and thin? The story of the growth of an ancient woman!

I must praise the author's writing style. This is a romance novel. I like the characters in it the most. Each character is very delicate, the writing style is smooth, and the context is very clear. It is very exciting and worth recommending!

Not particularly exciting. It's not too bad, I can watch it. I'm a complete novice. It's my first time writing and I don't even know how to arrange the chapters. But I have thought very hard and written very seriously. Although the content is still not exciting enough, the plot is not twists and turns, and the characters' personalities are not outstanding enough. But after all, it is positive energy and encourages people to do good. Although the protagonist does not have a golden finger or super powers, he is ultimately kind.