The Heavenly Secrets Mirror: From Mortal Clan to Eternal Immortal Dynasty
天机镜：从凡人家族苟成万古仙朝
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 418k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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125Chapters
5.8Score
14.4kReads · all time
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The writing style is not bad, but it is not very rigorous. For example, the Turtle Breath Breathing Method was only redeemed in Chapter 28, but it appeared in Chapter 26. I also don't understand the changes in the wealth value. It suddenly changed to 12 o'clock. I didn't see anything about selling the ore. Didn't they escape into the mountains? When did you go to change money? Also, the psychological descriptions in the first few chapters feel a bit repetitive, a bit over-emphasized, and not very attractive. The later chapters are not bad, and everyone's settings are relatively clear at present. What I am complaining about most is the names of the protagonists and the couple. Lin Tianyu is easier to associate with Ma Tianyu. His wife Liu Ruyan is the most iconic. She uses a bad name. The key is that she is named after Orion's wife as described in the book. She should be the daughter of a barefoot doctor. This name is somewhat inconsistent, and it feels a bit strange when watching it. That's about it for now. Even if you remove these flaws, it's still a potentially good book. I'm very optimistic about you as the author.
Multi-dimensional description, clear structure, food and grass
Good, keep up the good work. .
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The writing is good and the setting is very novel, but some of the plots are a bit detailed. It takes a little patience.