Mecha: I Tore Apart the Campus Beauty's Engine from the Start

After reading it, it's generally pretty good. It's obvious that the author has his own worldview framework and protagonist's personality framework. If the protagonist's style is maintained like this, and continues with the current story structure, it should be able to achieve a score of 9.2 Or above on Tomato. Next, it depends on how the author develops the worldview, and how to advance the plot while continuing to maintain the special personality of the protagonist. I would like to give you a 5⭐ encouragement [currently in progress] Not counting the front row tips, don't be misled by the title of the book. This book is not a college stream, nor is it about picking up a girl to have an affair with. The school beauty is just a passerby. The apprentices you take in in the early stage are just for your own goal process. Don't be misled by the long review with the highest praise. The protagonist's goal is very clear, and a series of events that occur during the goal process are simple and rough actions. Do what is beneficial and remove any obstacles. There is no procrastination.

On a certain level, this is an excellent novel that is delayed by its name. In fact, the school beauty in the title is just a sidekick. There is currently no heroine found. The overall look and feel is good, and the universe and mecha settings are also very full.

It kills decisively without leaving any consequences, with a little humor and humor. The writing skills are second-rate on the Internet, and the cool writing is second-rate. Although there are old routines and old jokes, the handling method is very clean, and the connection is very smooth. Male video contestants and cool writing contestants can directly join

It's really beautiful! It's just because of the name [face covering] I saw it a few times at first and didn't click in to read it. Later, when I ran out of books, I came in to read it and found it really beautiful! ! Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was about the main character accidentally dismantling the school belle's mecha in school and then becoming a blockbuster. After reading it, I realized that it had nothing to do with what I thought! ! The content is really beautiful! ! Even though the title of the book is a bit... The protagonist doesn't hide his name, so there won't be any plot of mistaken identity! ! Come on, author! !

Don't be put off by the title. The mecha pictures do match the description. The protagonist is very strong (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧, but the female protagonist should not be there. The description of the mecha battle process is very detailed (very good), and the mecha text is considered 👍.

Seeing Shit Yellow Button, it is the best mecha novel I have read so far. It does not have any messy extensions. It has advantages and disadvantages, and it meets the taste of some people. Although he is invincible, he is not without brains. I have never seen a similar book (even for the plot). Those who wrote about skin-changing should be the navy.

Personally, I feel pretty good about it for now, so I stayed up late to watch it. To be honest, the rating is relatively low. But I feel worse than the author. After all, I can't stand a good book with low ratings. Here are some of my suggestions for authors. Maybe the rating can be improved. First and foremost, the thing I want to complain about most is the title of the book. The promotion of this book should be good. When I first saw the title of the book, I didn't even have the slightest desire to click on it. But there are really no books to read. I happened to touch the interface by mistake again. After seeing the introduction of the author's book, I started to get into the trap with the attitude of taking a look. What follows is really exciting. Therefore, I personally suggest that you change the title of the book to one that is more attractive to readers, or that clearly indicates what the article is about, which can better attract readers who like this category. At the same time, the rating will naturally become higher. Secondly, the author should indicate in the tags no female protagonist, single female protagonist, or multiple female protagonists. Judging from the current situation, there should be no female protagonist or a single female protagonist. If the author does not clearly indicate this, some readers may not meet their expectations. This gives the phenomenon of negative reviews. In the end, the battle description in this book is a bit too long, and the author has few updates in a single day, and there are too many battles. One or even several pictures depict battles. This will lower the quality of the content of this book. It is recommended that the battle content be briefly described. Thereby improving the quality of articles. Or add a few more chapters in a single day, and use a large number of words to make up for the decline in the quality of the article caused by too many battle descriptions (of course, the quality of the content of the single page must be ensured, otherwise readers will criticize the word count or content, resulting in a decrease in the article quality score) These are my thoughts after reading it. The author's writing style is quite good. To be honest, my expectation is that this book should get a rating of 9.0 Or above. If there are any new thoughts later, I will add them. I also hope that supportive book friends will express their own suggestions to promote the progress of the book. Personally, I feel pretty good about it for now, so I stayed up late to watch it. To be honest, the rating is relatively low. But I feel worse than the author. After all, I can't stand a good book with low ratings. Here are some of my suggestions for authors. Maybe the rating can be improved. First and foremost, the thing I want to complain about most is the title of the book. The promotion of this book should be good. When I first saw the title of the book, I didn't even have the slightest desire to click on it. But there are really no books to read. I happened to touch the interface by mistake again. After seeing the introduction of the author's book, I started to get into the trap with the attitude of taking a look. What follows is really exciting. Therefore, I personally suggest that you change the title of the book to one that is more attractive to readers, or that clearly indicates what the article is about, which can better attract readers who like this category. At the same time, the rating will naturally become higher. Secondly, the author should indicate in the tags no female protagonist, single female protagonist, or multiple female protagonists. Judging from the current situation, there should be no female protagonist or a single female protagonist. If the author does not clearly indicate this, some readers may not meet their expectations. This gives the phenomenon of negative reviews. In the end, the battle description in this book is a bit too long, and the author has few updates in a single day, and there are too many battles. One or even several pictures depict battles. This will lower the quality of the content of this book. It is recommended that the battle content be briefly described. Thereby improving the quality of articles. Or add a few more chapters in a single day, and use a large number of words to make up for the decline in the quality of the article caused by too many battle descriptions (of course, the quality of the content of the single page must be ensured, otherwise readers will criticize the word count or content, resulting in a decrease in the article quality score) These are my thoughts after reading it. The author's writing style is quite good. To be honest, my expectation is that the rating of this book should be above 9.0 (The lowest expectation). If I persist, it may be even higher. If there are any new thoughts later, I will add them. I also hope that supportive book friends will post their own suggestions to promote the progress of this book. If there are some typos, please don't mind too much. After all, I typed it by voice😢😓😂

It's a very nice mecha story. The author is very talented. The world view is grand, the scenes are described in detail, and the mecha battleships are all illustrated. It's so handsome that I was blinded. There is no female protagonist, but the male protagonist is invincible in operation, and his strength depends on the upper limit of the mecha. As of the latest chapter 276, the large model is still being repaired [crying], and the large model is also still being repaired, but it has also appeared recently, killing indiscriminately and killing indiscriminately [admiration]. The male protagonist's usual machine is one stolen from others and one made by the college professor Lao Jiangtou. The shapes of the various forces are very three-dimensional, including the aristocratic empire that is afraid of death, the decadent federation with 80% useless members, the superior front against the bugs, the academy that unites friendship and positive energy, the terrifying bug swarm that combines wisdom and combat power, and the high-tech Flame Dragon Empire on the other side of the universe [smile]. The fly in the ointment at present is that our own combat effectiveness is somewhat low, and there is no high-end combat effectiveness that can support the scene. The people who give other shots are either the Silly Spore Councilor's men or the losers who came down from the Zerg front. In the future, can the author write something that can fight side by side with the male protagonist, share the battle pressure, and be trustworthy with high combat power? I've been reading books for a long time. Next time I come back, I hope to see the big size activated [laughs]

I didn't expect the content to be so good. It's a rare masterpiece. Although there are a few bugs and the author's typing problems, it is overall a very good science fiction article. It has a sense of grandeur, especially after I start to fight bugs. It is very good. The only problem is that it is not finished yet. It should be in the middle and late stages of writing. If the author can keep it steady, he will surpass 99% of the works. Come on.

I haven't seen the setting of cosmic mecha in a few years, so suddenly I found this book and it felt quite novel. The story is quite interesting, and the narrative is not long-winded. It maintains tension, suspense, and excitement at all times. At least it kept me watching when the main plot was clear, which is rare. I don't know if there will be branch lines or expanded plots outside the main plot in the future (for example, starting the war against Japan again or something). I hope the author can complete this work well! Taste! Bar. The author seems to be making progress like Xuanji (the artificial intelligence in the novel). From the beginning, the fighting was "boom boom boom", and then the multi-angle description was very good.