Max Out My Performance and Rise to King of Hell: I Open My Eyes and Get to Work

The author is the material for a bowl of rice without cp horror and unlimited streaming! The horror atmosphere is first-class, the sense of excitement is well grasped, the fighting scenes are novel and strong, the plot is advanced layer by layer, and the rhythm is comfortable. It deserves a rating of 9.5 Or above! In addition, the character setting is based on classics, the writing style in the later stage is sophisticated, the gender ratio is comfortable, and there are no insulting words for women (I am more sensitive to these when reading love-girls novels). It can be felt that the author carefully designed each character, and the character's image is very full. The author said that this is the first time he has written this type of story, so some deficiencies can be seen in some aspects. The heroine's life experience is not fully stated, and the mastermind behind the company is half a mystery until the end. The ending is too hasty, giving people the feeling of ending abruptly. But the faults do not hide the merits. Your writing is so good. I will always follow you [crying][crying][crying]

I'm tired of saying handsome. The plot is smoothly connected and the plot is full of surprises and fun. By the way, the author When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

Okay, okay, the whole plot is very interesting, and there are some small details in it, such as why the protagonist is so powerful, her handwriting is different from what I said, and the process of entering the underworld is not as remembered as others. Everything reveals that the protagonist is unusual, and the author has a very upright outlook. When I saw that the name was gender-neutral, I thought it was the male protagonist and almost didn't read it (because I just wanted to read some cool articles about women, don't complain about life being hard enough, I want to eat something good), but it turns out that it is the female protagonist, I like it 10 points, 10 points, it should be 10 points. I saw the score today. It was really unexpected. I think this article should be at least 9 points. Who gave me a bad review? It is such a good-looking article, but it has two stories at the beginning. The first story is very good, but I skipped the second story and went straight to the back. Can I Continuing, the next chapter of "Ju Ju Ju Wudi" is really good and really cool. The heroine is a smuggled in and has great abilities. Everyone competes for the highest position. The description of the article is also good, and the plot is also good. As soon as the heroine raises her hand, everyone is willing to accept it. Hahaha, it is very exciting. Who gave the bad review is too unscrupulous, it is so good. Really, everyone should give it a try. The level of this writing is much higher than the score. Give it a try. The back part is very beautiful and the writing is very enjoyable! ! !

At first I thought it was a growth-oriented heroine, but later I realized it was a cool novel. The heroine is neither aggrieved nor cowardly. She does it when she has something to do and does it when she doesn't like it. I also like the depiction of the warmth and warmth of human relationships and the harshness of the world [Adoration]

It's okay, but one star less is really a lot of pitfalls ➕Inexplicable plot Let me briefly tell you that Yan Shu escaped from the world of immortality. There was Taotie in her scabbard, which caused her death. In the original world of immortality, she was already involved in the world of heaven, the paradise of the west, and the Emperor Taishan of Dongyue. So in the original world, Yan Shu should have been invincible, so he kept going fast, because the person who was parasitized by Taotie was the reincarnation of the heavenly god general, and the people in heaven tried to protect him, but were killed by Yan Shu; and the reincarnation of the god who was parasitized by Taotie was the hand of the mastermind behind the scenes [laughing awkwardly] The mastermind behind the scenes, the god who fell into the devil, had already infiltrated the Taoism of gods and Buddhas... So, in the original interface of cultivating immortals, Yan Shu had no choice but to escape, quickly travel through many parallel worlds, and finally reach the current plane, and successfully became the Wheel King. However, she also said "Qingjun side" to Garuda and King Qin Guang at the end, because Yan Shu could actually know that the real infiltration behind the group came from the "Glutton God General" in her original world, so her plot was not just about the Wheel King. The author's worldview and ideas are definitely bigger and more complete. It's a pity that he hasn't finished the work, but the concept and subject matter are actually unique. If he can really finish it completely, it can really become a masterpiece.

Revenge is very exciting, and the killing is very enjoyable. However, it is a bit vague, and I feel that there is not enough foreshadowing, such as the identity of the heroine, and how to reconcile so many people who died in reality. There is a little information for the audience, but the story is novel and very exciting, and it deserves recognition.

Super pretty! ! ! It feels like the breast glands are all clear! The main theme is a story about revenge and revenge! The heroine looks at the rough lines, but there are actually some rough lines and thin lines, and there is no overnight feud. Murder to pay for life, debt to pay for money, everything is natural and right

It has become better since the heroine helped revenge the wronged soul. It has a very good horror flavor. How should I say it, it is not very scary but very eye-catching. It is like an anime I watched before. It is very attractive to watch. I only watched a little bit. I hope the later ones will be as good as this [Blow Kiss]

It's so good. This book is a very difficult one for me to find in Tomato. First of all, the protagonist is super smart and the character is super good. The plot is also very awesome. Every link is linked to each other. As long as the characters that have appeared are involved, not a single sentence is nonsense anyway. They are all foreshadowing. It's so good\(//∇//)\. In terms of coolness, there are different levels of coolness. The protagonist has a golden finger but it is super cool. It is not the coolness of treating your opponent as a fool. Neither party is a fool. There is back and forth, but the protagonist is better. In terms of plot, everything is a foreshadowing. No bug can stand up to scrutiny, and it can use the audience's brain as a brain. Some places may seem like bugs, but they are actually foreshadowing. You will know it later. In terms of character creation, since there are only 150 chapters, I can actually write it in more detail. However, if I really write it, I feel that the author will spend a long, long time. 150 Chapters is far from enough, but it is still very flesh-and-blood. The experiences and emotions of the characters are all written out. The names are also super good, not the kind of parallel import names. After reading it, I will have an impression of the characters in it. It is totally unreasonable that this book is not popular. I even think that this book can be published. I can actually read this book for free, and it's also finished, which is awesome. Although the author didn't expect it to be so big at the beginning, so the plot of this book is actually not finished yet, but the foreshadowing that should be collected has been taken back, so it can be regarded as a complete novel. Oh, and the author's scenario creation is so awesome. The horror atmosphere created in this book is really awesome.

The quality of the article is not as good as that of Tomato, and it is indeed not [laughing] Excellent work, the writing is concise and fast-paced, and there is no pretentiousness in the number of words in this type of work. The naming of the characters is also very skillful, and it can be seen that he is a mature author who has feelings for his work.