Don't Put a Knife to My Neck! I Really Didn't Go to the Dawn Hall!

Not to mention that the writing itself is good, readers can ignore most of the problems based on this update speed.

So far, the plot is okay, but some details are still relatively abstract. I won't talk about your 5m spear. How can you swing it in a small space? I like it, although it is true that I am just writing a novel. Just because you think a spear is cool, you cannot consider using this kind of spear all the time. This is also a problem that most young authors who are just starting out often make, but I have to say that it is still good so far, and the concept is very novel. Let's start here and continue reading. It's a good beginning. Let's see if it can be continued from beginning to end. It can be seen that you must have been very diligent when writing this book, so you have great scholars arguing for you, but you still have to control many details.

If nothing else, ten thousand at a time is really awesome.

I have read a lot of "Spirit Cage" fanfics recently, and this one is indeed the most comfortable among them. Unlike some fans who always stick to the old framework of the original work, some of its small settings and plot trends are quite fresh, and it doesn't read like a routine. It also reads very smoothly and doesn't feel delayed or deliberate. It's a standout among fan fiction. No, it's gone? ! I'll go, it still has to be four stars, but it's good that the author doesn't write bad guys [Like]

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Let's just talk about whether that gun can be more normal and get longer and longer. The 6-meter-long ones are used for stabbing.

It can be said that I have read the most detailed book written in the Lingcong fanfic. It can be said to be very beautiful. The author also reported that it is very beautiful and worth reading.

It's nice in fan fiction, where the author has his or her own ideas. However, the timeline of some characters has not been handled well, and there are some minor flaws, but it does not affect the reading very much. So I give you my five stars👍🏻

Will the protagonist be suppressed by Boss Bai in reverse? [Sinister smile]

This is really a very high-quality one among the Spirit Cage fics, at least in my opinion.