Zhang Wuji Transmigrates to the World of The Return of the Condor Heroes

I really like Zhang Wuji, and I got rid of the Yang Guo butterfly that I hate. I like this arrangement, and I hope I won't team up with Xiao Longnu for cp, because this girl is really in the way, unable to help and always holding back. Chased first. I'd better talk to Xiao Longnu and give up.

It's great. It's a fanfic I want to read. The first author is a book fan and reads books very carefully. It's not like some authors who just watch Douyin and don't know the version of the TV series and write martial arts fanfics. The second author has not changed the character of the original book randomly, and I really hate reading books where the author takes the initiative and ignores the characters of the original book and posts a lot of his own opinions. In addition, the low rating of this book may be due to the fact that most of Tomatoes are primary school students who read martial arts fan fiction and like to kill people and kill people in the air. They will quarrel with everyone and have sex with women. Orthodox martial arts fan fiction should be like this. In the book, someone changes his identity and personality and follows the original book to produce different developments. Good luck to the author.

It's a very good subject. Let Zhang Wuji not go back to the old era. Since Zhang Wuji came to this era, he wanted to unify the martial arts world, and then let Zhang Wuji become an emperor when he fought against the Mongols. Don't let Zhang Wuji break his arm. You can let Zhang Wuji marry a few more wives. Forget about marrying Guo Fu. If you want to marry, marry Guo Xiang. Marry Guo Xiang, Xiao Longnu, Lu Wushuang, Cheng Ying, and Wanyan Ping. After unifying the world, he can stand on his own. First destroy Mongolia and then unify China.

Thoughts after watching Chapter 15: Discussion on the lack of details in the plot First of all: I have never written a book, I have only read novels for a few years, and I have some ideas about the content and structure of the novels. However, several times of creation failed at the beginning, so I don't know anything about real creation... Here is just a brief discussion of areas that can be optimized. First of all, the author's in-depth exploration of the background and details is very solid, and the plot sequence is also very reasonable, which shows that the author has carefully polished the "idea" and has a relatively detailed outline. Very awesome [like] Then there is the problem with Chapter 15 that I have just read: It is a common problem in fan fiction. The in-depth description of the original characters still only uses the original work as an endorsement, so that the plot details are relatively "dry". It gives me the feeling that I am reading a detailed outline with adjectives... The expectation for readers of these plots is to familiarize themselves with the original works and understand the personalities and experiences of the main characters in the original works. The progression is narrative-style, with no transitions between scenes. Take the two major plots up to Chapter 15 as an example: The first part, "Peach Blossom Island Renshu Huang Rongzhong" is not much different from the original work, and it is still in the background stage. There is both detailed presentation of the content and time to speed up. But I didn't feel the "passage of time" in the plot. The characters' emotions were all stepped in a ladder. The favorability was increased to 10%, 50%, and 80%, and the middle part was omitted. This section is quite satisfactory. The problems in the original plot of the second part are even more serious. Regarding the part "Wuji showed kindness to save Xidu, and returned kindness to the ancient tomb", the favorability rating ranges from 0% to 80%! What exactly happened in the middle? How can I increase Xidu's favorability during this period of rescuing people? One is based on imagination, and the other is based on the original work. The author gave a good space (an uninhabited farmhouse in the suburbs) and a detailed background that can draw emotions into it, but the author abandoned this part of the description and instead made this content a "cut scene" of the Tomb Sect. This is very regrettable. To give an example: Xidu is slovenly dressed, unconscious and has strong martial arts skills. So, can he only have Wuji personally serve him before he can wash himself, have a good diet and even live a normal life? Should Wuji coax Xidu when he is not boiling medicine to treat his illness? In this state, will Xidu's "son" tell bedtime stories when he sleeps? You have to have some plot to convince me: why did Xidu let Zhang Wuji go after he became normal, instead of directly setting the setting "he is the only one who makes me happy in the past ten years"... Do you think that in books that are great at writing about fan fiction, do you think that the original characters will be directly described in terms of their personalities and abilities? Very rarely, most of them use some original short stories such as "at first glance, it is what this character can do, but it will not be exactly the same as the original choice" to write the original character's state that he hopes to focus on, and the character's personality that he wants to highlight. A slight OOC won't ruin the character, but will make him more real. Over, that's all.

Full marks so far, worth watching! Personally, I feel that this is the best written work on the same genre of Zhang Wuji's time-traveling of the divine eagle.

Not bad, not bad, tastes great, the portion is very generous, and the rider delivers it quickly!

The book is good, and the writing style is also good. I usually read articles without commenting. This review is just to affirm the author. I hope the author can continue writing and not stop writing.

It's very beautiful, and the characters' personalities are very realistic

It looks good, and has the flavor of martial arts from the past.

It's beautifully written, and the characters are very fitting.