The Pinnacle of the Navy! Starting from Being Captured by Garp

I haven't seen any Pirates fandoms that have a plot to recruit female harems without thinking, and the cheats are not that outrageous, which is good food. The descriptions of several generals are pretty good. Akainu himself is a person who takes the navy's reputation very seriously. Before executing Ace, he didn't think that Ace was because of his bloodline. Instead, he felt that he should die if he took the wrong path. It seems that Luffy does not need any fruit to be strong. So far, the story seems to be okay, and there are some ideas. Luffy in the anime has changed from a wise and foolish person to Nika's plaything, and he feels as if his body has been taken away from him. In particular, the companions have also changed from being like-minded to wanting to support Luffy in becoming the Pirate King.

A very good book, the main character has a brain and explains the justice of the navy from another aspect. Next, Ace should take over Akainu's position, Luffy will take over Aokiji's position, and then the protagonist will take over Kizaru's position. The three navy generals of the new era should be coming soon. But I estimate that the position of generals will increase, or there must be other actions on the Wulaoxing side. The protagonist turns his own conflict with the navy into a conflict between the navy and the world government. This conflict was originally hidden, but now it is revealed. The author's idea is very good and very novel. Well, this way of writing is actually quite beneficial. Even after watching too many plots of One Piece and Dance, it's good to change your mind.

The writing is very good, but the protagonist, Master Yuanmeng, is also a nanny. In the early stage, there are descriptions of cultivation, and in the later stage, it is all descriptions of other people. He only occasionally appears as a nanny. I haven't seen the CP for the time being. He is all about building bridges for the young masters.

After reading it for a while, I feel it's okay, and it's okay to pass the time. If I keep writing in this style, I should be able to become a masterpiece in One Piece fandom, but there are also shortcomings. There are a lot of private things. The first is the time someone set for Koushiro, and the time of Kuina's death. Here It's a trap, but the story that follows is that Red Hair didn't meet Luffy in Windmill Village. He feels like he's lost something but doesn't know what it is. If you change your destiny, change it. Don't write some inexplicable things. For example, the feeling of Red Hair is inexplicable to me. See if it can come back round later. It's almost a cool article. As the author himself said, just read it as a post about making up for regrets. Don't take the others too seriously. There are quite a lot of loopholes in logic and mentality changes, such as the bond between the three brothers, and the Warring States Period's attitude towards the world government. In addition, there are a lot of personal stories, and I borrowed the second creation from another book.

The naval novel focuses on a story of order and kindness, with the goal of uniting forces that can be united to turn the scum of the Celestial Dragons into history. His three views are correct, his combat power is semi-invincible, he doesn't abuse his master, and he has both parents, which is great. There is nothing poisonous at the moment. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you.

The storyline has twists and turns! Nice! Five stars for you!

It's really nice, it's what I imagined Ace Luffy would look like as a marine. Children are innocent, they just lack someone who can guide them correctly! It really looks better the more you look at it! ! !

The characters are created with great care. Luffy's stupidity, Ace's arrogance, and the chemistry between Zoro and Nami after joining the navy make the whole story exciting and warm. The multi-fruit ability and the battle scenes are not exaggerated, the punches are full of pleasure, and the warm daily life of refusing to use the knife is heart-wrenching. It must be praised by five stars. Don't miss it for One Piece fans!

It's quite good. It's almost the same as the one about One Piece: The Manslaughter of General Ron. I hope to keep up the good work and not use the eunuch one.

Very good, I want to see the plot of Ace and Luffy becoming marines [Like][Like][Like]

Good! Look! Really beautiful

The description technique of this book is very unique! Unique!

The writing is smooth and natural! The plot has ups and downs! Remarkable!

Awesome! The plot is compact and the story has twists and turns! The protagonist's character is described in detail!

The protagonist's influence is portrayed in detail! Recommended

Oh my god, this book is really the first one I have read about pirates☝️. The subject matter is novel, it keeps pace with the times, and it is in-depth. I really like it. Also, I am neither a human, nor a sailor, so this is the review of an old bookworm who has been reading novels for eight years.

My sister watched it and asked me to cosplay One Piece in the middle of the night. She said it was so good that it inspired her to chase One Piece in her childhood. Author, you are such a genius. I admire you for being able to come up with such a good plot. I am in awe of you. You are the god of One Piece fans, their gospel, and their new creator. Author, you continue writing, even if you make Luffy more invincible, it is best to create some new skin elements for him to give the cosplay circle a bigger shock.

The sentences in this book are smooth to read! The storyline is great!

The plot is meticulous! The storyline has twists and turns! Recommended!

Excellent writing! The plot design is reasonable!

It's pretty good. Although there are some nanny stories, it can't stand up to its newness. The author has used some of the latest comic plots, so there won't be such a strong sense of fragmentation. The only thing that made me feel a little uncomfortable after reading the whole story was the scene before and after Gu Yina eats the fruit. It was a bit forced and sensational, and it was quite disgusting, but luckily it was just this one section, and the rest was nothing too poisonous. This book also has a lot of references. If you read enough pirate novels, you can actually see the shadow of several books [star]. Fortunately, I borrowed the settings and didn't copy them all. It's good.

The book is good overall. It would be nice if the incomprehensible words could be removed. For example, when you are thinking alone, you will write mumbling to yourself, and then there will be some specious adjectives. Banter, raised lips, firm warmth, etc. If I remove all these words, it will not affect reading, but will make it more comfortable.

Good-looking, the perfect world line that Garp hopes for most

After following so many Pirates fanfics, this one really stands out! From the protagonist being captured by Garp to start his naval career, to bringing up Luffy, Ace and others, every step is full of surprises. Sand sculptures have passion hidden in their daily lives. For example, Luffy develops a dragon-shaped fist machine gun, Ace plays ultra-high-temperature explosions, and the battle scenes are so intense that they take off. And there are no brainless cheats. The character growth relies on solid training and tacit understanding. It is warm and delicious. Five stars are given. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

The villain's conspiracy in this book is layered step by step, and it's very fascinating to read. The characters are well presented!

This is one of my favorite One Piece spin-offs. The author greatly respects the setting of each character, his writing style is also very good, and the plot of the novel is also very smooth.

The storyline is great! Very interesting story! Recommended! So pretty!

From a naval perspective, with a bit of a pig's trotters, think about "Admiral" Wang Luffy, Ace, Sabo, 😁😁😁

The writing is smooth and comfortable. To be honest, I have never read a few pirate fanfics that are so comfortable to read. Actions, expressions, language, including appropriate psychological descriptions are all available, and rhetorical techniques are not used at inappropriate times. Although these are basic skills, the comfort level is much higher than other fanfics, although most of the fanfics are new authors.

The writing style is delicate, the writing is smooth, and the way the characters speak is based on the original design as much as possible. The author is really attentive. When watching One Piece, I felt sorry for Mr. Zefa, especially when the song "Guide to the Sea" played... And I also hoped that Mr. Garp's wish would come true. So I personally like fan fiction from the naval perspective. It's great. I love reading it. Great support for the author!