My Online Girlfriend Is So Improper, Yet She's a Cold, Aloof Saintess

The writing is okay, I hope there are two improvements. The protagonist should not go around saving people, be more decisive in killing, and take revenge on everyone who provokes him. Don't be too righteous and don't mind your own business. The second is that I hope that the single female protagonist will have more emotional scenes.

The theme of this fantasy novel is relatively new. Dating my girlfriend online through jade pendants. Exchange messages. The male protagonist is selling goods. Generally speaking, fantasy has an invincible cheating system. This can be regarded as a rare business story about cultivating immortality while selling things. Looking forward to the subsequent plot developments on various continents. As a fantasy harem, you should take it all in

This kind of subject matter is indeed novel. It is a pity that it is written as a harem.

Very good, the material is fresh, but it must be a single female protagonist, the author is great

The subject matter is novel, but there is still a common problem that it is easy to change. I hope the author can sort out his ideas and create a good work.

It looks good, but the male protagonist in the front is a bit frustrated.

It's quite novel and the style of painting is also good.

Not bad! I like

It's really beautiful. I haven't read such a top-notch novel in a long time [laughing]

Overall, it's okay╮(￣▽￣)╭, but there are some problems with some words and words. It would be better if I changed it. It's still very good, but there are a few minor flaws.