[Old-School Writing] [Xuanhuan] [White Hair]
Feng Yi was twenty-one, suffering from leukemia and ALS.
He died in a hospital bed, then was reborn in a Xuanhuan world.
He was born into the Feng family of a county town.
Half an hour after his birth, a golden bolt of lightning struck his body.
[Host has obtained the Music Dao Dimension]
A mechanical voice gave this notification, then disappeared.
After being born, he became the youngest of the Feng family's three sons and was named Feng Yi. Aside from the System's mechanical voice, no one knew what illness the lightning had brought with it.
A few strands of his hair were white at birth.
As he grew older, his hair turned whiter and whiter.
His illness did not make others treat him coldly. On the contrary, his sweet and lovable nature earned him the devoted care of his family.
By the age of six, his body had recovered enough to move around.
He asked his father to buy him an ordinary firwood zither and a book of scores.
From then on, he spent every day practicing.
At sixteen, he mastered the “Heavy Water” zither intent.
By his coming-of-age ceremony, his hair had turned completely white.
During a meal, his father told him that an immortal sect was recruiting disciples.
He also gave his second sister two choices.
That day, his father, Feng Zhan, brought him an old-fashioned zither case. Inside was a golden-threaded ancient zither made of paulownia wood, named “Heavenly White,” which he placed in Feng Yi's hands.
Taking the zither, he said farewell to his father and set off for Kaifeng with his second sister, escorted by his eldest brother.
His second sister was found to have a sacred-grade fire spirit root and was taken away by a mysterious mighty cultivator.
He was found to have a superior-grade wind spirit root and was taken in as a personal disciple by the First Peak of the Heavenly Sword Sect.
He sought immortality and the Dao.
In the end, he became a Red Dust Immortal and attained eternal life.
With his snow-white hair, he came to be known as the White Exile Immortal.
So far it seems pretty good, at least there aren't any major flaws. I'll give a follow-up review after it's finished. I think it's probably a female lead-less series.
It's not bad, but I wonder if the protagonist's cultivation level increases too quickly? [Smirk]
Keep up the good work, author! There's so much room for improvement.
It's not bad, but the pace is too fast.