Urban Snapshots: From Lobotomy to Guixu

(The previous comment seems to have been swallowed, so I will rewrite it) Conclusion: A great book Let me first tell you about some of the flaws of this book for those who are hesitant: first of all, the author is quite complex and he is a name-dropper, so you can see some names of characters in other works, but they are not related, so please do not confuse them; secondly, this book prefers detailed descriptions of scenes. If you are not interested in this kind of description, you may find it uncomfortable to read or feel that the author is wasting his words; finally, it is light and slow. Yes, the pace of this book is relatively slow, and it seems that there are not many noteworthy performances in each chapter, but if you have been reading the chapters for a long time, you may have a good experience. So now, the advantages: Compared with other monthly articles, this book is more rigorous in setting the worldview. Even if it is not so perfect, it is at least within an acceptable range, and there are several readers who can be called the author's strictest fathers. They have corrected the lax places and discussed with the author. Just like the flaws mentioned above, as a reader who has requirements for picture accuracy, the detailed description of this book is more to my liking. Maybe this is the so-called common cause of likes and dislikes? The fight scenes are really great, by the way. Threshold. Maybe this word seems a bit ridiculous, but it seems that recently there are people who don't understand moon calculations who are curious about what kind of world this is. The reading threshold of this book is not high, it can even be said that there is no one. As long as you read it carefully (and the author has given information), you can slowly piece together the silhouette of this city. The writing style and humor sometimes have a sense of alienation. It is light but not boring. How should I put it? It is just right, not so childish and not so serious. It seems very ordinary, but very comfortable. The character creation may be regarded as a group portrait (although the author did not use this tag). It seems that Tool Man does not have it at present, and it allows me to remember the events, names and corresponding personalities of each character that appears. I think it is already amazing, especially when there are more characters (but maybe it is because of my good memory) From the perspective, there are either no books with abnormal characters as protagonists, or... Well... Forget it, but this book can provide an appearance that matches my imagination of the protagonist, and I can see his gradual growth, but I still hope that he will not be assimilated by the city in the end. In short, everyone who reads the book review should really give this book a try. At last. Author! Two updates a day is really not enough! The first volume is finally finished, which is a pity and a joy. Generally speaking, there are not many outstanding points. There are two flaws that have been mentioned repeatedly: 1. The highest mountain and longest river overlap with the Broken Wing Feather at important nodes, but the different perspectives can still bring a good reading experience. 2. It may be more serious, especially near the end of the first volume. It may be a problem of grasping the rhythm. However, the author also said that he was afraid of not understanding the main line of the second volume, so there was a problem of temporary pacing. Fortunately, he used a powerful liver to finally end the somewhat lengthy first volume, but I believe this will also dissuade some readers (mainly because he loves fighting too much) However, from the beginning of the second volume, it can still be seen that the author has made some progress. The plot is not so protracted, and it seems that he has come out with his own style. In fact, I think it's too early to follow up on the review, but I can see that the author is timid and still needs such a long review as a reassurance (it will not be as good for you if you stop writing!) Secondly, he did a good job in foreshadowing and wrapping things up, and some materials that were previously considered useless actually played an important role in the beginning of the second volume. For example, the "Thousand Faces" in the first chapter, I always thought it was just an introduction, but the clues started to appear at the beginning of the second volume, and I began to wonder whether there would be similar skills like the Faceless Man behind Prison Years (there must be, right?). Oh, and Bai Ye, a flavoring agent made to prevent the monotony of the journey, the personification is so delicious All in all, I hope this work will get better and better

I have read the best Tsukiki novel from the perspective of the Abnormal, and I feel that the author may have borrowed from Broken Wings, but overall it is quite good^ω^, but the pace of the book is a bit slow, so the author will update it quickly!

Laughing, I performed oppressive work on myself

Overall, it is a pretty good book, although there are some flaws in polishing the details, and it seems to have some similarities with the plot of Broken Wings... But it does not affect the reading. I hope you will read more!

Your rating is: A+! No one can match your art. Even the ring masters can't help but be moved to tears when they see your works! Come on, author, your story is actually quite good. As long as you keep updating it, you should be able to make some achievements. At least it's pleasing to my eyes. It's not bad.

Why does it feel so similar to a Naoye fan I've seen before, except that one was a human and this one is a fantasy, but it's still pretty good.

The writing is not bad, but it is a relatively rare monthly essay.

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A black Tai Sui life

This article is very suitable to my taste. I read it very quickly. It is very good. Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 Hun Xi Returns... Hun Xi When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally.