Mumbai Alice's 24Th Book

The reason for missing one star is that the setting is a bit vague and many details don't look like the heroine. For example, the male other than the waiter and the virgin are not girly at all, so how can they be shown to be feminine? I won't go into details, there are so many. Shouldn't all women be tough? Although the poison is not too much, the details are not well controlled.

The writing is great, step-by-step, and the character and strength of the protagonist are relatively good, but someone has also raised it, and I have the same problem. The heroine, the heroine, the heroine must look like a heroine. I hope the author can change it or notice this problem in subsequent updates. Some places really don't look like a heroine.

I was disappointed, I thought it was the kind of novel where men are not women but I read more than 20 chapters, but I didn't see that it was women. This evil fall system is also simply to increase the protagonist's strength, harem novels

Say it's black or not, say it's good or not, and occasionally some intellectual manipulation

There are no details, just an ordinary harem novel feeling [face covering] [face covering]

It doesn't have any special features, and it's hard to make people want to continue watching.

[Lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

What is the main business of the author? [Laughs evilly]. The book is good. The description of the world of female heroes could be improved. The author's description of several male sidekicks in this world is not very suitable for female heroes.

The male protagonist is too violent and evil. Might as well change it to cultivating merit

Not pretty at all [angry]