From the Start, I Crashed into Yi Xuan’s Huge Boob, and Now I Just Want to Survive

So you mean it became a group portrait after the old capital fell? ... That's enough for everyone, once you get to the first installment of the epilogue, you can basically declare the book finished. If you want to continue reading, I guarantee it won't be good.

This is a very good fanfiction about Zero: The Last Jedi. While it has some minor flaws, it's understandable given it's by a new author. The writing is good, with a lot of room for improvement. It effectively evokes the reader's emotions, which is rare among new authors.

It's a great read for me, a satisfying read, but the updates are slow. Otherwise, it's really good. I especially like the plot where the protagonist sacrifices himself to save others. By the way, I gave the author a tip of over 10 yuan; could you please update faster? 😳😳

It's so good! The segmented chapters, excellent character development, and well-developed plot are all great. I recommend it to those who enjoy slice-of-life stories. There are some drawbacks, though, such as the protagonist's relatively low combat strength, poor system usage, and a lack of detailed combat sequences. Secondly, the writing style might make things difficult for the author later on.

Please update soon!!! This is my first five-star work on the "Zero Zone" series. Could you please stop with the hidden identity trope later on? Also, the amnesia part needs to be resolved sooner rather than later; that's not a good thing.

When will the story enter the main plot, or rather, before it enters the main plot? If all goes well, approximately how many words will it end with? Author, please reply if you see this, thank you.

The protagonist is an artificial human, right? Does he have "brothers"?

May your writing be imbued with emotion, and your words resonate with sound. May every line you pen touch hearts, and may each creation bring new inspiration. May you soar freely in the world of literature, writing your own magnificent chapters!

The emotional shifts were so sudden that the dialogue felt almost human-machine.

I have to give it five stars. It's a bit of a shame about the amnesia part, but please, less of the chaotic scenes! Even a happy chaotic scene would be fine. I can't really explain it, it's just a different feeling, my own personal opinion. I've read the story several times. I don't like chaotic scenes, but if there's a well-written one with less chaos, I'll keep reading. It's so well-written, I definitely support it!